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Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 8:01:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story. i always felt like he should have at least gave her the choice. after all, she was his first friend....

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 3:23:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

damn you should totally make a story out of this, i wondered what could happen if marie went with logan after liberty island

Author's Response: ive been thinking about making it a story. maybe in the near future.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 9:29:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Did he really thought he could sneak out? Really...

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 3:01:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

NICE!!!!! Never gave any second thought to her going with him!! This was short and to that point precisely! I liked it!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 5:15:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

This feels very natural, like it could easily be just exactly what they would have said and thought at that moment. Nice work. --Wendie

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2010 12:18:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

love it! i wish i had gone this way in the movie!

excellent for your first story in here!

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