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I have read many many MANY of fan fics from this website. And this is by far the most heartbreaking chapter that I have come across. it almost made me physically sick because of how much I was feeling for Logan. I applaud you. It takes a lot to churn my stomach of steel. Keep doing an amazing job!
ok, i can understand logan smelling that she's pregnant, but tasting it on her? whered you come up with that?
oh my god, that is soooo sad! swear to god woman, don't make me cry!
Your words tore me up. Please give me more. I really, truly will have a hard time waiting for the next infintesimal word of this story. I love your way of writing. It's beautiful. Undeniably sorrowful and plentifully painful. But beautiful nonetheless.
~Mia
that was heartbreaking, I can imagine Logan grieving as he is remember, very powerful chapter. Hope to read an update soon, and maybe a miracle for our favoirtie couple!!!!
lunarkitty, you made me cry!
Oh gods you made me cry with this chapter. Poor Logan, Poor Marie. Poor baby. Now I'm gonna go cuddle my son before I fall apart. Good job, you're an excellent writer!
'She wasn’t sure what else the man could take before his adamantium skeleton would be the only part of him left unbroken."
Hell, you didn't spare anyone's heart, did you? Certainly not mine. I started crying at the car seat...took a brief dread-filled reprieve during the 'courtship', wedding and birth...and then pretty much cried like a baby from 'Charlie has leukemia' till the end. I love that the Wolverine tried to spare him the pain, tried to stop him from opening that door...but he was a good enough man to go through it anyway. This is, quite simply, brilliant--from the foreshadowing to 'showing vs. telling' us about the pain that caused all their problems. I anxiously await the next chapter. --Wendie
very good story!!
totally unexpected twist there with little Charlie, so sad.
No parent should ever have to bury their children...
Curious about the next chapter so please continue!!
oh my god... that was so heart-wrenching.
It was so beautiful. But oh, my heart just broke into.
Great job. Can't wait to read more.
Please update soon.