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Reviewer: Totally Black Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2010 8:54:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just happened to read other people's comments and I want to say this - I don't think you should feel pressured to adhere to any pairing just because this site is called the Wolverine and Rogue fanfiction archive - they are both in the story, they interact, we see what is going on in both their lives, and regardless of whether they end up together or not should not really matter as long as we see the evolution of a story. Otherwise we would all be pressure to only write happy endings, or only write certain pairings or only .... you get the idea. It's your story and you can do what you like with it. We all accept that. I think that this story has more attraction for me for two reasons - one that you have managed to make this pairing work without making either character to over the top and alternate from canon, and secondly we might see a different dynamic between Marie and Logan with this storyline, they will have to confront a lot more issues, his lack of action (he's the older/mature one), her seeming betrayal(how else will he see it - he's hardly gonna say Good On You Girl), his expectations(What - she was meant to wait around forever until he got up the guts to approach her? She doesn't have a healing factor and thus is not immortal - times a wasting), her independance(which she is finally asserting towards Logan's place in her life instead of reacting semi-passively to his actions), I think that is very brave and adventurous of you to take that approach and I think it makes a great change from the typical tale, fluff or angst, where you know what's going to happen, just not when. This tale keeps you guessing. Go You!!

Reviewer: Totally Black Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2010 8:41:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my oh my!! I am so happy!! I can't believe that you managed to stay true to Victor's character and yet still find a way for him and Marie to be together. I love that she has givern him her name ... in a way almost more intimate than her virginity. And I like that Victor has reached a point where he is thinking about his life, I don't think he has ever wanted to confront it before this. Now normally I admit to being a Wolverine fan but after too much fanficton I am tired of him dragging his backside when it comes to dealing with his feeling for Rogue - thus my love for this story and the Victor/Marie pairing. No-one has ever managed to write a good story with this pairing where we see what Victor could be whilst staying in character. You have done the most magnificent job ... and I look forward to the next installment and any more smut that might come our way will also be appreciated of course. *grin*

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2010 1:25:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

i wants next chapter

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 6:56:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

I LOVE IT!!!

normally the idea of Rogue and Victor would annoy me but you really drew me into this story, especially when you draaaaaged out the sex and i was begging you to write it. and it was worth the wait.

i like twists! and i looove this...mmmmm i want some Victor myself right now!

Reviewer: Ella Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 2:50:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

I second Wendie's comment. Don't get me wrong, I thoroughly enjoyed the Rogue/Victor chapter very much - very hot! But I am anxious to get back to the Rogan action (hint, hint). Update soon.

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 1:43:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

I thought I was the only one with a secret Victor/Rogue fetish! More Please!

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 11:44:02 AM Title: Chapter 15

You ever get that feeling, like your lungs inflate and you can't exhale because it'll mean the end of something that you don't want to end? Yeah, this chapter did it for me.

That's right. I just quoted your comment on my story onto your story. I hereby demand that you cannot read mine till you give me more of yours!!!!! Gaaaaahhhhh!!!! Pweeze update soon.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 10:51:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

If I wanted to read stories about how much Marie and Victor mean to each other, I wouldn't go looking for them on this site. HOWEVER, that having been said, I will follow this story faithfully because I am fascinated to see how you bring this full circle, which you seem to hint that you are going to do. Even if she ends up riding off into the sunset with Victor (God forbid!), there still will have to be some kind of reckoning between her and Logan and THAT I am anxious to see. --Wendie

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 9:26:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love this chapter! And I'm glad Marie didn't run again. I just wonder why her mental Logan is silent.
I'm so looking forward to your next chapter and I hope it will be about Marie and Victor getting to know each other better (I don't mean the physical way)

Reviewer: Totally Black Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 7:52:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh .. and since I am already almost begging you for a pro-Victor stance, can we see more of the inner Victor, the one that Rogue can see is like Wolverine, that has maybe decided to rejoin humanity and let go of some of the big bad past? I think if ever Victor was to reform it has to be for someone like Rogue who has enough inner strength to deal with him.

Reviewer: Totally Black Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 7:48:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Okay ...now you've done it. After 5 long years of lurking and NEVER reviewing I am breaking my own rules for you and you alone. I am proud to say that I LOVE this story, I LOVE you pairing Rogue with a Victor Creed that has more than one dimension to his character and I am (almost ashamedly) proud to admit that I think it (almost) serves Logan right for leaving her to hang for so long. I am actually hoping for more Rogue/Victor action and if I had anything worthwhile to bribe you with I would attempt to sway you to a Rogue/Victor happy ending, cue Wolverine angst here. I am loving this and recommend it to everyone.

Author's Response: I am honored that you like my story so much to break such an important rule. Especially because this is my first lengthy story. I am not going to say what is going to happen. I decided exactly what to do with this story months ago and I am not going to change it. All I can say is that I hope that the ending for this story will be to your liking. Thank you so much for the review. I appreciate it so very much.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 7:08:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

If this whole chapter isn't enough to rip my heart to shreds, the last line sure as hell is. Damn! But this pain is nothing compared to what he'll endure when he finds out she gave herself to Victor -- and loved it! -- and he only has himself to blame. That ain't gonna sit well. No sir, not well at all. --Wendie

Reviewer: Ransom99 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 1:26:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH MY GOSH! Take my soul but don't leave the dogtags!!! Poor wolvie!

I neeeeeeeeed to know Logan's reaction when he finds out she was with Viktor, despite how unbelievably sexy you make him sound, my heart is still faithful to Wolverine.... But I may slip up. Once or twice. Haha

Can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 11:44:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Very nice, Logan is of course, going to find her?

Reviewer: desy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 9:30:04 AM Title: Chapter 14

Hehe, now that she's gone Logan realized what he had...
I hope he'll search for her soon, but on the other hand I don't want him to find her too soon - she needs a little more alone-time with Victor ;-)
I hope the next chappie will show us a little more about Victor and Marie (love that pairing, too)
Can't wait for the next update of this great story!

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2010 7:42:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'll give ya give ya give ya. MORE! You can't leave me hanging like this, he's gotta fix it and fix it now!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2010 1:20:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

the thing with rogue and victor going on is still a little weird. continue please

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2010 12:37:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

Not that this wasn't hot--'cause my chair just burst into flames--but somewhere in all this Victor-the-Great stuff, I've lost the thread of the Wolverine/Rogue story. How, if at all, is Victor giving Rogue 'the little piece of heaven' going to affect Logan and her relationship with him? This seems to have taken on a life of its own and gone from Rogue setting out to get drunk and get laid to her and Victor discovering a 'connection' that almost has this looking like she's meant to be with Victor instead of Logan, which would make me, for one, very sad. --Wendie

Author's Response: I completely understand what you're saying, and I agree. But believe me, with where I wanna take this, there really isn't any other way I could start this story out without such a heavy emphasis on Marie and Victor to have the right effect I want the end to have. It's a work in progress. and this was the first lengthy story I have attempted to write. I am just starting out with this one and I could very well wrap it up in the next 3 chapters but I really don't want to. So I have to draw it out as much as possible. Don't forget the title of the story *wink*.

Reviewer: natsuki sochi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 12:56:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

loved it. now logsn has Major competition and know victor he may have real feels for rogue and rogue him. she may even end up telling him her real name which will drive logan off the wazoo. (insert evil laugh here)

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2010 8:24:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

P.S. great line "Prepare for the Apocalypse everyone, Victor actually gives a shit about somebody and it ain't Jimmy."

ooohhh, wouldn't that be a kicker and if she and Vic wound up together. well, since Logan has been a complete asshat in this story, she should be with Victor if he's going to keep being this surprisingly awesome.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2010 8:21:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

ooohhhhhhhhh, i haven't been on this site in forever (avoiding my story finishing responsibilities) and thank god you updated this.

that was hot, sweet, a bit dirty and purrrrrrfect! yummy yummy Victor...crap, now i have a new story idea and still have left to finish before i can start another! damn you!

god, i need a cigarette, that was so hot.

Author's Response: Oh you don't even know. It took me a while to do it, and then I celebrated by smoking 2 cigs! it was awesome, I feel accomplished!

Reviewer: Ally Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2010 11:10:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Okay, so now we get to know what Logan's gonna think about all this, right? Right? Oh, please, gotta know! Oh, and VERY NICE sex scenes. ;-)

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2010 4:30:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

I liked it and I somehow hope that they'll stay together.
Please update soon! Wanna know the morning after

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2010 12:14:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

wow, awesome chapter totally hot, hot, hot. I really do love it when Rogue and Victor are paired together. I can't wait to read where you take this. I'm so, so hooked!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2010 10:32:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

Seems like a pretty good cure to heartbreak to me!Yay Victor! More soon please!

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