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Date: 08/28/2010 7:13:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
I kinda think it's getting a bit much different storylines, but on the other hand there could be much more twists in the plot.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to more Victor and Marie. I love the way you write Victor and I wonder how they will react with the other one around 24/7. Will Marie figure out that Victor is Logan's brother?
Date: 08/27/2010 3:08:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm really sorry to say this... and I sure don't want you to take this the wrong way....
But I really want you to stick to what you had going, because that seemed like a lot already. It's heading in all kinds of different directions now. And I was far too curious about what Logan will think of Marie with Victor. So yeah.
Since I'm commenting, I still need to compliment you. Because I love the story so far, I just wouldn't follow this tangent if I were you.
Waiting on a new chapter still!!
Author's Response: Well what I want to do with the story... is kinda hard to pull off if I don't explain what Logan has been up to, why he didn't get a chance to look for her before he did... I dunno. Maybe I will revise it in the future if I cannot come up with something else.
Date: 08/25/2010 8:33:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
more Rogue and Victor. I'm a huge Rogan fan, but I really enjoy how you've portrayed Victor in this, I like the side Rogue brings out in him. I wouldn't mind you writing them together! great fic hope to read more soon (espcially more Victor Rogue smutt!!!)
[Report This]Date: 08/25/2010 2:05:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok, my reaction is, "more Rogue and Victor!" Also, I really want to see Logan's reaction to Rogue and Victor.lol, I'm evil that way.
Date: 08/24/2010 11:41:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
The first half of this is fantastic. I love that the Wolverine is kicking Logan's ass into shape. Not too sure Logan would be crying, but I ain't gonna be picky...
Or maybe I am. If this whole mission thing turns out to be pivotal to Logan and Rogue getting back to their ROGAN destiny, then I'm all for it...but if it's just a way to stall said reunion for a few more chapters, then I say let Scott run the mission and let Logan get back to tracking his woman so they can settle the question of which feral she REALLY belongs with. I'm just sayin'... --Wendie
Author's Response: I'm sorry to disappoint you Wendy, but if you didn't like this chapter... you are definitely not going to like the next one. I might post that one tonight.