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Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2009 6:02:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

I will count minutes till Monday. This is good. And Jean is a beeeeeep beep beep beep...I never liked her. I mean come on woman, make up your mind. And stop teasing.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2009 2:53:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am just loving how this is turning out. You get so much done in so few words. Can you teach me how to do that? --Wendie

Author's Response: I guess we never really thought of it, because we knew it. But my sister and I actually both write stories and post them on here under my account. rnrnThe stories I have written personally are:rnStayrnLogan's FirstrnWithdrawalsrnrnrnMost of the short stories are my sisters. Because that is her style. My style is more dragging as much out of a story as possible. rnrnAnyways, I just wanted to let everyone know this little tid bit of info.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2009 5:15:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well, he had it coming. But I still want her to forgive him. I mean, he has seen the light, right? Right? RIGHT? Merry Christmas, darlin'.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2009 12:06:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

In keeping with the songfic genre, as Joni Mitchell once sang, 'You don't know what you've got 'til it's gone.' (Big Yellow Taxi) Logan, like most men, doesn't do 'subtle'. It usually takes a railroad spike through the head to get their attention, yet most women continue to hint at what they want and then wonder why they almost never get it. Sheesh! --Wendie

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2009 12:01:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

OK, so I'm kicking myself now for not sticking with this when the first chapter irritated me, although in re-reading it, I can't for the life of me remember why. I won't make the same mistake twice. --Wendie

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 11:15:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

o poor logan, update soon plz

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 10:20:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well, he can be clueless. But he needs to make it up to her.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 6:44:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

Where do you get your amazing heart-wrenching one-liners from? "Her image of him touched a part of the heart he claimed he didn’t have." Loved it. x

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 5:39:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

Howling? well thats just rude and inconsiderate of him. People are trying to sleep. ;-) xXx

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 6:06:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

"It’s suicide to stay and murder to leave." Amazing line and a great little (sad) chapter. Excellent work. x

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 2:23:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh, you and ur cliff hangers. these chapters are too short :( plz update soon

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 6:57:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad you decided to continue this story. Can't wait to see if you do more, and his response to her leaving.

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 5:10:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

It will be interesting to see his reaction to this letter.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 5:58:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Logan's a bit of a tease, huh? Kinda selfish too. Not lovin' this Logan. Love the chapter but not the Logan. xXx

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 8:14:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

*sniffle, sniffle** so sad

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 5:53:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

You SOOOooooooo have to make this a full blown story. Its so sad buta great storyline. :-( Pwease. I'l give you a cookie. double chocolate if you kill Jean in the end. xXx

Author's Response: with a temptation like that... who can resist. rnrnI hadn't planned on conitnuing this story. In fact, i had meant to mark it as complete... my mistake is your gain.

Reviewer: Comic-cake Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 2:18:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Once again you manage to pull at my heart-strings with so few words. x

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 1:08:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice start. I wander how long will he be clueless about his real feelings?

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