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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2009 8:00:04 AM Title: Open Hours

*glares at Warren*

I'll pluck his feathers the next time.

Author's Response: he's such a killjoy, i have to play with him hee hee!

Reviewer: Gaia Moore Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 5:42:28 PM Title: Open Hours

absolutely fabulous =)

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 6:45:40 AM Title: Open Hours

Nothing like the love of a good woman to make a man do things he never thought possible. This just gets better and better, but things might be going a little TOO well for this couple...something is bound to go wrong, right? I'm guessing the battle that's coming between Wolverine and Victor will be nothing short of epic. --Wendie

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 11:56:22 PM Title: Open Hours

Ooh, Victor is gonna be trouble. Great chapter. I always like it when Rogue, even though she doesn't have control of her mutation, can kiss.

Author's Response: well, i can't deny the girl everything, i have a heart LOL! and yes, this is not the last we see of Victor, he's just too good a source of trouble to ignore. besides, Wolverine hasn't had any major problems for a few days and where's the fun of that?

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 11:21:44 PM Title: Open Hours

So excited to find an update when I checked the site today, and then, to make it even better, another chapter added just after I log in to comment on chapter 9!!! this is getting great. I can actually picture a younger looking Logan. And Rogue being older in this one is priceless! Wonderful job.

Author's Response: thanks. yes, she's the dirty older woman LOL! glad you're enjoying it, i hope to have a new chapter up tomorrow or Monday.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 11:34:36 AM Title: Skipping

Awwww teen Wolvie in luv... so cute *giggles*

Author's Response: please tell me if it starts getting sappy. i want cute, not barf inducing LOL!

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 5:38:34 AM Title: Skipping

awwww. i love this version of wolvie. though i am feeling a bit perverted since he's a teen and i'm in my 30s but, what the heck. oh well who cares...he's getting some rogue, he's getting some rogue lovin! woohoo (does a little dance) i love your writing style. it flows and never gets bogged down. keep up the fabulous work!

Author's Response: thanks! perving over the teen Wolvies reminds me of how I stare a little too hard at that werewolf boy in Twilight LOL! thanks for the comment on my style...yes i am definitely trying to avoid getting bogged down with a bunch of internal monologue or angst, which is what made my last story grind to a halt.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 2:09:23 AM Title: Skipping

I bet this was beastly fun to write. Either that or having to restrain Wolvie and yourself must have been killing! I love how you have the voice in his head down perfect. Whistling?!? Hahahahaha! --Wendie

Author's Response: it is so fun! my other couple of stories have gotten a bit out of control with the angst and nonstop whining from the characters, so i need this for a break. yeh, whistling...he's a kid and can't totally school himself to be the 24/7 adult badass we're familiar with LOL!

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 12:27:48 AM Title: Skipping

Loved this chapter. I seriously had like a high school flashblack. It was cute reading them enjoying a moment between the two of them. :)

Author's Response: if only there was a boy that frigging cool at my high school hee hee!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 11:04:50 PM Title: Skipping

Oooh smoochies! Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: the adult wolverine would claw anyone who used the word smoochies in reference to him...as for the teenager, it totally fits LOL!

Reviewer: freelke Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 9:11:25 PM Title: Skipping

hah! great chapter! Definitely a new look at an old story :) I really enjoy reading it alot

Author's Response: thanks. i mean what the heck else would two kids skipping school get up to? can't you picture Wolverine at the mall? me neither! not that i would know...i never skipped school. nope, not me. good girl, i was. *evil grin*

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 2:33:14 PM Title: Walk and Talk

Awww Wolvie like how Rogue smells.

Author's Response: what a little animal LOL!

Reviewer: Gaia Moore Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2009 9:45:18 PM Title: Walk and Talk

Excellent story so far!

Reviewer: SmileyCindy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2009 8:19:26 PM Title: First Day of School

omg I love this story! This young Wolverine still has the anger and craziness the older one does! Lol

Please update! You are doing a wonderful job!

Author's Response: thanks! i was planning to update tonight, but don't feel so hot and am not up to writing, but i plan to have the next chapter up tomorrow evening.

Reviewer: freelke Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2009 4:16:52 PM Title: Walk and Talk

really fun story. light and enjoyable to read :)

Author's Response: ye, i'm trying to keep it light. chapter 10 will move in a new direction, but still pretty fluffy. it is high school after all, teenage drama is always silly to me.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2009 6:46:01 AM Title: Walk and Talk

My, my Wolvie 'asking' permission? Will wonders never cease. You are doing a beautiful job of subtly showing how he is growing to care about lots of things, including himself. Loved the walk back to his room. --Wendie

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad i'm doing a decent job of showing him maturing a wee bit...but not too much, he's still a feral teenager after all. my god, what would it be like to try and raise one of those? the horror!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 10:49:17 PM Title: First Day of School

I haven't said it before now but I am oh so loving this story. It is cute and refreshing and funny and just great.

Author's Response: thanks! working on the next chapter now and will have it up tomorrow night. i'm really enjoying toying with the characters in this new way, especially Wolverine because i can't draws on a teenage Logan like i can with the other kids from X-men Evolution and how they appear in my mind. teenage Logan is constantly surprising me with his silly little inner monologue. it's really fun to take the usual bad ass Wolverine and make him an awkward kid trying to be tough like every other teenage boy in the world. and i'm glad you're enjoying the ride too :)

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 10:39:09 PM Title: Walk and Talk

I'm really enjoying teen Logan. I loved the interaction between him and Rogue post-boxing. Also, he and Avalanche being typical boys. Great work.

Author's Response: thanks! one of the thing i wanted to really focus on in this story was they are still just teenagers. even with all these powers and their weird lives they still goof around, have silly conversations, and flirt in their immature way like "normal" kids. plus, i work at a university so all the swearing and boys beating on their friends for fun is something i see a lot.

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 5:41:31 PM Title: Walk and Talk

Can't wait to see what comes next. Love the interaction you have between the characters. And the depth you're giving to everyone.

Author's Response: thanks! you'll see more of a couple of more minor characters get a little more developed in the next few chapters, see them more fully fleshed out i hope...unless my muse takes a swerve which he (i.e. Wolverine) tends to do. LOL!

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 12:48:06 PM Title: In the Ring

I haven't had this much fun in a long time! Love that you shifted to Warren's POV and the double knockout was great. Nobody wins. Nobody loses. Does this mean there will be a rematch? Perhaps in a different arena altogether? Can't wait for more. --Wendie

Author's Response: oh there will be one later one, one that decides the fate of several characters *evil grin*

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 9:18:58 AM Title: In the Ring

nice!

Author's Response: that was the mental image i had too LOL!

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 7:58:21 AM Title: In the Ring

This story keeps getting better and better. You are also the best at end lines. "Angel groaned. He was so fired." I can just picture it now. His wings all droopy and his face in his hand. Please continue this. I can't wait to see what happens when they wake up.

Author's Response: finishing lines are always fun. reminds me of Law & Order or CSI where they always cut to the first commercial with some silly one-liner that sums up the story hee hee!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 7:06:49 AM Title: In the Ring

I think that was just the foreplay ;)

Author's Response: am i that obvious? LOL!

Reviewer: TarainthePNW Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 4:35:04 AM Title: In the Ring

That was soooo excellent! Ohmygod, can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: thanks! you won't have to wait long, i'm writing the next chapter now. well actually i wrote it last night, then my computer got all wonky and ate it, so i'm redoing it today ha ha!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 3:41:09 AM Title: In the Ring

Double KO! I don't even like boxing, but that was a great scene. I'm lovin' this!

Other than a few typos and misspellings, this is damn near perfect.

Author's Response: thanks! i know it seems like no matter how many time i proof i always miss stuff, gah! yeh, i'm not a boxing fan either but it was the one fighting style i thought was somewhat realistic for this story.

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