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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2009 5:34:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

"'And the rest of us?' She asked.
'Common household waste. Better off dead than taking up space and consuming resources.'
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Except he promised her parents he'd take care of HER, right???

Author's Response: He promised to take care of her, yes. Because of that he valued her higher than any other mutant, and her survival was his goal. But he would have made sure that she survived even without his promise. She's a formidable weapon, and most likely will survive in the real world.

Reviewer: jnet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 10:09:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That is one heck of an ending. I'd try to write a more profound review, but I'm still in the, WOW phase. All I can keep thinking is WOW and Damn!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 12:43:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Woah! He gets to be the hero and the anti-hero and the official Bad Guy! I didn't see that coming. Good job!

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