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Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 4:00:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

That was a really lovely chapter. Especially the last part. I could almost see it happening in slow motion, it was that vivid.

~Mia

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 8:47:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

This is one of the most beautiful stories here. Prey continue.

Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 5:54:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Bingo. Perfect. Dead on. Couldn't be better. Nailed it. (I could go on) Top notch. Outstanding...oh, you get the idea. --Wendie

Reviewer: Elliesmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 12:14:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the new chapter. I'm glad Charles put a stop to everything and put Marie first. I like the development between Logan and Marie, keep it coming.;)

-Ellie

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