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[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:43:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
i looooooooooooove how you are able to make such a massive impact with so few words. full of emotion and power with a few lines.
wish i knew how to edit myself for maximum impact like that but i tend to be a blabbermouth.
but i've got a new idea for a story once i finish the two i'm working on. maybe i'll adopt your shorter style, i think it'll work with what i have in mind.
[Report This]Date: 10/20/2009 11:58:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
# 1: It's good
# 2 It's Real
great job. Keep going if you got it in you!
Author's Response: Thank you it was a suject I don't know much about thank god. So I wanted it to feel real not just a get up get over it off to the mall we go thing because that would be insulting to victiums of abuse
Date: 10/20/2009 11:54:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This feels very real, mostly because your writing style makes it feel that way. 'Stream of consciousness' is the perfect style to capture the scattered thoughts of an abuse victim. Very poignant.
Peace,
Wendie
Date: 10/20/2009 2:49:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Now I want to go back and watch her "father" die some more. Poor Marie. But she IS strong enough. And she loves him too (heeee)...
Author's Response: If I can't shake writers block you may get your wishrn