Ok, right off the first few chapters there were a few things that I noticed, like spelling "bole" instead of "bowl" "role" instead of "roll" and I was under the impression that some parts of the chapters were just unnecessary. But, when I got to the second half of the story... well I'm so glad I did, cause it started coming together. There's incredible visualization there, the way you describe scenes, I can see the camera angles in my head! Love love love that. Like in this chapter how you start the scene with Scott washing his face, and the part you start the scene with an awesome description of Wolvie smoking. You keep getting better and better. And well, the plot itself is good :) But you stopped at the best part! Love the last scene! Oh please give us a new chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for that wonderful review!!rnrnI know that my first few chapters, were a little, shaggy, to say the least. That's what happens when I write late at night ;) I do plan on reworking them, one day.rnrnI do plan on writing more to this story. I have this thing, with this one...sometimes I'm in the mood for it, sometimes I'm not. I only write when I am in the mood for a certain story. I already have the entire thing figured out, beginning to end. It's just to get into the writing zone I guess.rnrnHowever, I am glad that my story is giving you that much insight into my brain. Makes me feel real good! And yup, when I write something, I write like as if it's a film or real life. Not like a book. Too see the camera angles in ones head is exactly what I was going for!rnrnAgain, glad you enjoyed it.