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Fantastic! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the wait will be over by mid-week next week. *crosses fingers tightly*--Wendie
ok now i read this a second time it makes more sense
Author's Response: Still trying to decide how to take this...--Wendie
"The entire group looked at her like she’d just beheaded a puppy."
That line is priceless! Definitely one of my new favorite all times lines from a story. This story has been great, compelling with just enough conflict and angst to keep it moving. Great job!
Author's Response: I am SOOOO glad somebody mentioned that line in particular. I don't often crack myself up when I'm writing, but I have to confess to chuckling over that one several times. Sometimes I wonder where such thoughts come from, but I refuse to look a gift muse in the mouth. I'll take them any way I can get them. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Chapter 6 should be up in a few days. Here's hoping it's just as entertaining.--Wendie
OOhhhhh. Jean is a sneaky little wench isn't she?! xXx
Author's Response: Well, to be fair, the professor did say 'by any means necessary.' It occurred to me after I wrote this that there must be some sort of code among telepaths about not poking around in someone's head uninvited, or else no one thoughts would safe from 'inquiring minds'. Jean used the professor's words to justify the unauthorized 'poking', at first, but then I think she was just enjoying pissing him off. Thanks so much for following along with me on this little adventure. Chapter 6 should be up in a few days.rnrnPeace,rnWendie
Better and betterer. Loving this.
Author's Response: Thanks! This has been my favorite chapter so far, but I'm hoping the next chapter will be just as good and just as much fun to write. -- Wendie
Great job. I love it when Scott and Logan antagonize each other. Jean's not my favorite but I kind of get her in this chapter. Hopefully she really does want what's best for Rogue. Here's looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: I really appreciate all of your reviews. I love it that you are specific about what you like and don't like. Yeah, Jean really does want what's best for Rogue, which, of course, is Logan. But I think Jean wishes they would wait a while longer before taking their relationship to the next level, even though she knows they probably won't. I mean, somehow I can't see the Wolverine and the Rogue denying their baser instincts once they get a chance to experience them, do you? Hopefully, Chapter 6 will be done in a day or two. Thanks again. -- Wendie
Great chapter. I thought the insight into what Logan was thinking was fantastic. I can see him being that torn between what he wants and what he thinks he can't have. And I loved this part: Logan just smiled as Jack slammed the gate shut behind him.
You think Paris Island was tough? Compared to me, boys, Paris Island is gonna look like fucking Disneyland.
um ok?
Author's Response: You know, you're right. The end of this chapter was a little flat. I should have put the first section of Chapter 5 on the end of this. I think that would have provided a bit more drama at the end. But, hey, live and learn. Here's hoping Chapter 5, which should be posted later today, gives you more to work with in terms of a review. -- Wendie
very insightful chapter. I want to see what happens when (not if) he goes back. I hope he comes to his senses.
silly boys xXx
I wouldn't want my Logan any other way... doing whatever he can to protect the woman he loves. Very nice!
I've really enjoyed the first three chapters. Loving your Logan-voice, and a slightly different take on Rogue. Interested to see where you take this ...
love it. xXx
Oh, Wow.
I absolutely loved that little bit of Rogue using Wolvie's mutation to her advantage, to send her own little secret message to him, it was so awesome.
I also love how you've presented her wanting to keep her 'control' secret. [I say that in air-quotes because she's only learned to turn it off, she hasn't truly learned to control it per se, she can't turn it back on at will yet, that I know of.] A fair amount of the stories tend to present it as 'she doesn't know if she can really control it or not, and doesn't want to hurt anyone on accident', referring to her wanting to keep secret so that she "[wouldn't be] poked and prodded and studied" was very original. I had never really thought of it that way before, the fact that if she suddenly gained control they would bombard her with questions on the whys and hows of it.
Ending on the ironic note that she's lying to herself, pure genius. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
yay such a great chapter. Alot of reading between the lines. thanks for the quick update! I really enjoyed reading it!
ooooo this was somewhat of and uneventfull chapter, hope next one is better
ok Whew. That was not as bad as I thought. I still think Logan needs to pull his head out of his ass and just kiss her already. lol Though if he did that then there wouldn't be much of a story to tell. lol
D'aaawwwww.
Sad Rogue and now an angsting Wolvie....
How much better could it get! KuKuKuKuKu
Here's to hoping that the story keeps on coming.
Damn Logan. I am scared now to read the next chapter! Lord, this is nerve racking. Update soon to put me out of my misery!
ooooo update soon!
Ooooh...Ororo...Bad timing. Logan, don't run again. It's pointless.
OMG! What stupid thing is Logan going to do? Is he going to tell everyone about her control? Is he going to leave? Is he going to forever deny there is anything more between them than friendship? The possibilities are endless and I can't wait to find out!
i am so excited for what will come next! Great work ;)
Love so far! awesome ending
yay! i love this story. please continue very soon!