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[Report This]Date: 10/22/2009 12:55:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. I thought the insight into what Logan was thinking was fantastic. I can see him being that torn between what he wants and what he thinks he can't have. And I loved this part: Logan just smiled as Jack slammed the gate shut behind him.
You think Paris Island was tough? Compared to me, boys, Paris Island is gonna look like fucking Disneyland.
Date: 10/21/2009 8:02:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
um ok?
Author's Response: You know, you're right. The end of this chapter was a little flat. I should have put the first section of Chapter 5 on the end of this. I think that would have provided a bit more drama at the end. But, hey, live and learn. Here's hoping Chapter 5, which should be posted later today, gives you more to work with in terms of a review. -- Wendie
[Report This]Date: 10/21/2009 7:37:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
very insightful chapter. I want to see what happens when (not if) he goes back. I hope he comes to his senses.
[Report This]Date: 10/21/2009 6:20:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
silly boys xXx