Got to read more and I loved it...Will rea more next week.

As to scene chasing...Well, I spend too long at work not able to get near a computer that isn't monitored...Could you imagine writing wolverine/Rogue fic and hving your boss come up and say, Um...Yeah...Hit the road...So, I spend a week building scenes in my head and think of things I want said or done. Then I sit down on Friday evening and spew it onto my laptop.

I would cry if I forgot some of the things I came up with...My stories are like my children.

Try going to bed thinking about the scene you worked out(keep a pad and pen beside ya and think about what you remember of the scene) and then if you are like me it will steep in your brain all night and then it'll reveal its self just before total consciousness. I have my best epiphanies at that point.

Then again mental insnity might be catching and my advice may be suspect. ;0)
Sid
P.S. Can you tell I love all-stops?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Thanks with naked Logan on top for loving it. I will absolutely take your advice with regard to scenes and how to hold onto them. I haven't tried writing stuff down before bed, but I'll give it a go. I have had more than a few morning revelations, however, but mine hit when I'm in the shower. Many scenes, plot devices, bits of dialogue and character motivations have revealed themselves when I'm lathering, rinsing and repeating. Good luck with your Friday 'spewing'. --Wendie

Okay...Another reason not to read whilest you write is finding out your clever ideas are already cleverly used. I finished a section yesterday morning where Logan and Wolverine think/observe different aspects of the same scene. So, I was reding what you wrote in response to my review and thought what the hay I'll look up the fic that you mentioned and what to my wondering eyes appears...LOL...A Logan/Wolvie prospective. Oh well, I am back to read this fic. Great start so far...

Author's Response: Hello Sid, I am so glad you liked the beginning of this. Hope you enjoyed the rest. And I, too, have found out the hard way that great minds run in the same channels. The worst feeling is when I've written something weeks or months before I've finished and posted it, only to come upon a recent posting that totally steals the thunder from my story by using the same concept or plot device or whatever that I thought was so utterly unique to my perspective. When that happens, I comfort myself by hearkening back to something I read a long time ago. "Originality lies not in saying what has never been said, but in saying what you have to say." Short of plagiarism -- a universal capital crime punishable by death if you ask me -- no two of us will ever see the same thing exactly the same way, nor express the same idea with the same words, so not to worry... But, true as that is, it doesn't take the initial sting out of that first read, does it? Again, thank you so much for letting me know you like this one. --Wendie

yay! i love this story. please continue very soon!

Forbidding Rogue to do something? What's that they allways say about bulls and red flags? Still, that was a fantastic excuse to get her naked;-)) I'm loving this.

I do so love when Logan takes care of Rogue. I like where this is heading!

Good start! The thought of Logan looking sheepish just cracked me up! I hope you update soon and often.

ooo whats next to come?