“I spent so much time chasing after a woman that intrigued my dick that I never noticed the one who’d stolen my heart” – Perfect wording, for me this one line did a great job of summing up the whole Jean/Logan/Rogue situation.

Wonderful power behind some lines within the fic with the emotion holding all the way through.

I generally don’t like song fic’s or fics with any lyrics attached to them but I’m glad I read this one! I don’t know the song and didn’t need the lyrics as the story held it’s own without them.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this from start to finish.

Well done x

I'm not usually a fan of songfics, but being a fan of this particular song I decided to give this story a try. I think you did a wonderful job, especially from Rogue's point of view. When you had her destroy all the things Logan had given here, I got a little choked up. That, to me, is the sign of good writing. If you can get an emotional response from your readers, you've done a good job. Well done.