Love Logan being overwhelmed by his lust for Marie. I love that he seems more affected than he does right now. I am sure that will change soon though, right? Cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You know Logan when he gets something in his head and right now all he can think about is seducing Marie. Sounds good to me! LOL

This is the best chapter yet! Mainly:

1. The way you portray Jubilee. “Logan's a guest. And seriously, babe,” she turned to Marie, “it wouldn't matter if he was 500 years old. The man is hot and you know it.”

2. Caleb. Great character. “I don’t know anything about anybody,” Caleb held up his hand to ward off any further questions. “If you think there might be something to talk about, you’d better ask somebody who knows something and that definitely isn't me.”

And as I’ve already mentioned in previous reviews, I love your portrayal of Logan.

Looking forward to Twist and Shout x

Author's Response: Thank you! I may have said it before, but I love Jubilee! She is so much fun to write. She can get away with saying and doing just about anything. Original characters can be anything I want them to be so without any constraints on them they are really fun to flesh out. I'm so glad you liked it. This chapter took me a while to figure out for some reason so I'm really glad you felt it was the best yet. Thanks again!