LOL That was the best ever Logan and Scott OMG HAHAHA!

You were off to a cracking start when I caught sight of the title of chapter two and was laughing my socks off before I’d even read chapter 1!! I herby give you a gold star for using ‘arse’ and not 'ass' (all hail the Queens English!) :) Again though, as with the first one, this would benefit greatly from a close re-read or beta. I think it’s sometimes easier if possible to give it over for someone to beta, as when you re-read something you’ve written yourself you tend to read what you wanted to write and not necessarily what you’ve actually written!!
This was a great addition to ‘You think that Scott is sexy?’ each stand very well on their own as well as becoming a wonderful continuing story in series form. I’m looking forward to another instalment, well done x

Author's Response: God save the Queen!! for no other reason but to piss of Charles. Woop woop. I do re-read, I type it all out, then go reread. And then wait a while (hour or 2) then read again once I've forgotten what I wrote and I use spell check. I just suck at editing. I'd love a betta. I can see other peoples mistakes but never my own :-( sadness. Thanks for the response. :-D xXx