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You were off to a cracking start when I caught sight of the title of chapter two and was laughing my socks off before I’d even read chapter 1!! I herby give you a gold star for using ‘arse’ and not 'ass' (all hail the Queens English!) :) Again though, as with the first one, this would benefit greatly from a close re-read or beta. I think it’s sometimes easier if possible to give it over for someone to beta, as when you re-read something you’ve written yourself you tend to read what you wanted to write and not necessarily what you’ve actually written!!
This was a great addition to ‘You think that Scott is sexy?’ each stand very well on their own as well as becoming a wonderful continuing story in series form. I’m looking forward to another instalment, well done x
Author's Response: God save the Queen!! for no other reason but to piss of Charles. Woop woop. I do re-read, I type it all out, then go reread. And then wait a while (hour or 2) then read again once I've forgotten what I wrote and I use spell check. I just suck at editing. I'd love a betta. I can see other peoples mistakes but never my own :-( sadness. Thanks for the response. :-D xXx
Haha, not only do I absolutely love the title of this piece, the line "only a towel to preserve his modesty. Well his penis. Let’s be honest," made me snort/snigger loud enough for my co-worker to look over with concern. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks. Considering the first story was written while I was suppose to be working it's good to know that someone else is being naughty too. xXx
I loved it!! Thick-headed!Logan is always so much fun to bring out and abuse every now and again....plus... pairing him with a pregnant and hormonal Marie is just icing on the cake! Skanky!Emma was a nice touch to bring out the REAL thick-headedness and hormonalness of our duo!! Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you :-) xXx
He's such a GUY! Grrr. They need to be bopped on the noggin or it doesn't click.
Author's Response: yup they certainly do. But don't worry, I have a plan to get him to notice his grievous mistake. MWHAHAHAhahaha... thanks for reviewing. xXx
Nice. I like seeing clueless Logan and insecure Marie. Pleeaaaasseeee update the next!!
Author's Response: I will and I'll probably add to and reread the first chapter. I like clueless Logan too, he's so cute when he's confused. xXx