I would give it like a 7 out of 10. Your detailing is good as is you use of tenses and your ability to emote. So far its not so different from the movie so I can't give you points for originality... yet. But your summary gives me enough info to know you are not just going to describe the movie for us... So I look forward eagerly for more. I would however work on your formatting and chapter length. The formatting was a little difficult to read because there are no spaces between the paragraphs. Just hit return once or twice so there is a blank line between the paragraphs. It doesn't seem like much but it makes a vast improvement on readability. As for the chapter length, its a bit short for me. I generally try to get around 1500 words per chapter but as its a personal preference thats not something that like absolutely must be done or something.


Is this review more helpful? Sometimes I forget to be specific. Sorry I wasn't more helpful in my first one.