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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2010 1:13:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

wish you would update this...it has so much comedic and sexy potential!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 3:54:39 PM Title: Prologue

Oh no, just saw the Admin note!!!!
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Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 3:44:47 PM Title: Prologue

This is so much fun so far!
Looking forward to more... hope you're going to update!

Jean's request and list of requirements is hilarious :) and i love the carrot she's dangled in front of Marie.

can't believe how pathetic Marie was in her attempt to interrogate all those guys at the bar, but I liked the writing style you used, kept us guessing.

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 2:57:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

oh haha I think that we all want a man just like him! lol

btw these lines :
Logan leaned back in his chair. “What do I get for helping you?”

I frowned. “What do you want?”

A wicked gleam hit his eyes. “A boon.”

“A boon?” I scowled. “What the hell does that mean?”

“It means I’ll help you make your list and you’ll give me whatever I ask for.”

-- LMFAO! lol that was hot! HURRY HURRY WITH both fics!!

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 12:26:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

Dammit! STOP GETTING ME ADDICTED TO YOUR FICS!

Ok... I NEED to know what happens next! I just finished another semester of school yesterday, and I'd absolutely burst with happiness if you gave me a few updates of your lovely fics!

Reviewer: Obsidian Sins Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2009 12:19:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Don't we all want a man like Logan.

Loving the story even more. Update asap!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 7:27:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

Okay I am in love with it, I admit it.

Reviewer: calemzoe Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 3:34:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

He likes her He likes her! Yay! Firstborn for reals! It is a little on the 'odd' side but I like it!and I love that Jean wants someone who looks good in sunglasses...heheee! Rogan forever!!

I LOVE the high school bit so ....OKOKOKOKOK...so your NEXT story should be about jock-Logan and geek-Marie in high school...or college. OR maybe she's the cheerleader and he's the loner (Breakfast Club anyone?) Anywho, they should be young and he shouldn't really dig her since she's a little out there, but he does. And don't make it a tutor-story since you are headed that way in The Deal. It could even be at Mutant High or something, where they could have their powers...I don't know. Just an idea!! I don't think I've seen a Rogan story like that..just sayin. I'm on a Beverly Cleary kick right now, so teenage angst is my current thing....not that I didn't get enough of that during my own teenage years. Ugg.

Reviewer: ChildofLore Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 3:33:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

“You aren’t going to want my firstborn or anything, are you?”

“And if I did?”

OMG!! I love this so much, and you haven't even really started!! Great job, you really have a gift for AU's and dialogue. I'm definitly a huge fan of your stories now. This could even be better than Stamp of Approval... We'll see. Keep up the amazing work.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 2:59:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

I wouldn't mind being little red riding hood if he was the wolf. xXx

Reviewer: replaying Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 12:48:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

So glad we get to finally meet Logan :)

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 11:13:18 AM Title: Prologue

Ooooohhhh, a boon! Maybe it will entail whipped cream and silk scarves?

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 10:03:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

*sighs* *heart flutters* A boon... Everyone wants a man like him someday.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 9:00:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

I want him too! And I love how he gets what he wants from her. This ought to be hilarious. More please!

Reviewer: Obsidian Sins Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 9:28:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

You know, I really don't think Jean came off too bitchy at all. She's the exec of a huge company. I'd say she's more aggressive and knows what she wants than bitchy. But that's something she'd need to have, yeah? Anywho, loved this chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 6:51:07 PM Title: Prologue

Ouch. Can you imagine a situation like this happening for real? I can. Bwahahahahaha!!!

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 4:18:48 PM Title: Prologue

ahahaha Jean is crazy, just a tiny bit crazy! ;)
again: poor Marie.
but hey, at least we get something to laugh at, right? ^^ and now give us more, please =P

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 4:02:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god! More please!

Reviewer: SamiSweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 2:51:23 PM Title: Prologue

OMG...the career, the social ineptitude, the quoting of research and statistics, this Marie is me! Please, please make this as good as your other fics so I can live vicariously through her!

Reviewer: Kerryanah Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 1:13:52 PM Title: Prologue

askita ... causin problems again. a lot of writers seem to want to blame her for what they wrote lol. and THANK GOD if that is the case. this is sooooooooo uber mega supremo brilliant! i swear, i have read everything you have up here and i just love your work. i won't be suprised if this turns out just as good as all your other stuff.

marie is just ... lol ... i don't know what to say - apart from i wish i knew her just so i can laugh at her. and that poor guy at the end ... and the way you wrote it, made me go 'is that Logan!' to each fella. even the end one lol.

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 12:25:55 AM Title: Prologue

Please, do not start writing OMG angsty stuff because your gift for humor is unparalleled! I frequently burst out laughing when reading your stuff, in large part because of the wittiness of the dialogue you come up with. Nobody does it better!

Author's Response: me and angst? We met once. it didn't work out. *grins* thank you very much for the great feedback. i'm happy that i've been able to make you laugh-- that is the ultimate compliment! I've got more of this one ready to be posted soon. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Obsidian Sins Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 11:26:57 PM Title: Prologue

Haha. Love the premise. Very unique. I can't wait to see what Logan does to help and what Marie's reaction will be!

Author's Response: thanks! this is going to be a fun one to write. i just hope you guys find reading it as funny as i find thinking about its possible scenarios as i write. :)

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 11:16:29 PM Title: Prologue

very interesting first chapter...you should definitely post up the next chapter pronto!

Author's Response: the next chapter is on its way. keep an eye open for it!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 9:54:57 PM Title: Prologue

yep weird. Wondering if she is actually looking to get pregnant for a news story or something.

Author's Response: next chapter will do a little explaining. promise. :)

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 3:49:38 PM Title: Prologue

uhh -- lol?
this sounds...interesting ^^
poor marie. you just love to torture her ;)

Author's Response: lmao. yeah. i'm sure your response will be the same as everyone else's. a nice version 'what the hell did i just read??'. =P but bear with me. there's more coming.

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