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Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/10/2009 12:19:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

keep going with it, its awesome. i want to see what happens next

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 6:15:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was very lovely, nothing at all wrong with it. I'm excited to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 6:30:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

More more more!

Reviewer: Wolverines_darlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 10:15:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Like the story so far cant wait to read more!! :) update soon please!!

Reviewer: InsertNameHere Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 8:13:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

The start of this story is fantastic. It's a pretty unique take on the Marie/Logan dynamic. Usually one is lusting after the other, but the way you have it they're both just kind of tripping over the reality of a mutual interest. Excellent. More please.

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 8:08:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, loved it!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 2:01:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this! Love Logan just hauling off and kissing the heck out of her. Now if he can keep Marie from running away (cause she doesn't want to hurt him) when he wakes up it will be perfect!

Reviewer: AKovar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 11:06:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I agree with butterfly53: Wolverine POV has really been done well and you've hit it. Can't wait for more... AND if they are your two favorite characters, then it's my opinion that you won't let yourself post anything that you're ashamed of. :)

Reviewer: jackmansgirl Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 2:09:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds good so far. me likey

Reviewer: Tasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 2:02:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nope. Looks good so far. =) Okay, better than good. I'm interested in reading more when you get it posted.

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 9:48:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you showed both characters really well. I like the direction so far. I'll definitely eb on the look out for new chapters :)

Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 9:40:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the point of view and actual use of language. I haven't read much of Wol POV that is substantial. Keep writing,

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