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Reviewer: DeeLove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2014 3:31:44 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

This one made me cry.

Reviewer: WiseWords Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2011 11:51:40 PM Title: Map Me With Bruises

Um so it turns out that I read this series before, and I did what I always do when I read a book or a fic I love: i spent a few days torturing myself cuz of all the angst, then I tried my bestest (when I use words that dont exist, it means that real words arent good enough. Take it as a complement, lol) to forget it, so that I could read it again and enjoy it just as much as the first time. And it worked!!!!! I luuurrrrrve(love) it sooo much! The Yummiliciosity (the more words i cram into an adjective, the higher the complement paid ^_^) was ridonkulous. And I love you for it, lol. Even the angst (which I used to hate) is somehow like a warhead, (the sour candy) which is so sour at first, then so sweet...
Ok this is my longest review maybe ever, and for sure the longest one on this site, so Ill shut up now and read more....

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 2:08:47 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

This was really good, and I am so glad you decided to expand on the first title. Ok, I have to read the rest.

Author's Response: Thanks :) i'm glad too actually, and it was all because of five reviewers lol

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 9:21:58 PM Title: Map Me With Bruises

No ! It wasn't too mean, and I hope you do have the next story up soon! You just can't start a series like this and just trail off!!!!!

Author's Response: You are the first person to know that the 1st draft of the third and final part 'Feels like Suffocation, Baby' is finally complete! Currently it's a little over 10,000 words long and though i won't say any more i will tell you that Scott plays a big part in it. it will be up as soon as i've gone through it a couple of times with a fine comb.rnrnthanks for the review :) (feels ever so accomplished)

Reviewer: Tasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 2:10:18 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

What the heck can I say that everyone else has probably already said?
Hot! You have guts, girl. I could never bring myself to write this stuff.
Don't worry yourself with your word count. A story reads better when you get drawn in - not when it feels like you rushed to tie it up at the end. (Not that yours feels like it did, but sometimes you can tell.)

I wonder though. If Logan let Marie absorb a bit of him here and there, maybe she would age a little slower. ;)

Author's Response: lol thanks and you could tell me that you've kidnapped hugh jackman and are willing to share - no one has yet said that to me ... though i have been sent milk chocolate covered logan via mail ... yum. and maybe not guts as much as what the heck, not like they know how to find me. lol. yeh, it's just that after the 1st one the second one seemed really small but there was literally nothing i could think of putting in there, and i was worried that you guys might point that out so thanks for clearing that up.rnrni based my marie a lot on movie marie - even when she absorbed pyro she didn't really seem to be able to keep his powers for long. when she absorbed logan the second time it was to the point of near death and she does show characteristics of his but that faded before he woke up. she even stays herself and shows no visible signs of logans mutation other then healing the cuts when she touches him the 1st time - no claws, etc. rnrnso my marie can't keep the powers long either. they just drain out of her. sure he heals the small cuts and bruises she has, and some not even the whole way, but she can't keep it for long. and something like affecting her age would be too big to do without killing him, since its a constant thing.rnrnand plus that would be the easy way out wouldn't it lol, never been the fan of the easy way - unfortunatly.rnrnthanks for your great review :)

Reviewer: bklyangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 2:06:56 PM Title: Map Me With Bruises

If I don't like it, when I come back to re-read the fic, I'll skip over it and make up my own ending in the fic.
In any case, thanks for the first two : )

Author's Response: most welcome

Reviewer: bklyangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 9:15:28 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

Can't you make it so she can keep it? As hot as the story is,I want a happy ending!

Author's Response: I wish i could but that would be taking the easy way out - plus this is angst for a reason. and anyway there is still part 3 to go, i don't know what you'll think of the ending but ... well, we'll see.

Reviewer: bklyangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2009 5:14:39 PM Title: Map Me With Bruises

One think i am confused with, wouldn't she be able to absorb his healing and therefore as long as she does she will still look the same age?

Author's Response: FINALLY! Someone addressed this so a big thanks to you. When i started this fic i knew it was going to be controversial - it was going to make Logan look bad because he does do bad things. and i wanted to keep it realistic. he goes out with a 17 year old and Xavier reacts to that realistically. I didn't want to give him any excuse for making his actions seem better. There was also going to be none of the 'well i'll give her my mutation so that we can live forever' stuff. this was going to be bleak and hard, there was going to be no way out for him, no magic solution to make their lives better. there life is crap but they decide to keep at it because they love each other.rnrnnow for the tech babble. in the movie we never get to see rogue showing any signs of keeping mutations of the ppl she touched. not even straight after touching pyro. it didn't look like she could keep it for long, and even when Logan nearly died for her on liberty jean says that she acted like him for a while but she's back to normal when he wakes up. so i figured that she couldn't hold onto their powers for long. in my story Rogue gets glimpses of his thoughts, feelings, and when she holds on for too long she gets a little healing. then he drains out of her again. i guess in my story Marie would have to kill him to keep it.rnrni hope that has answered your questions, if not drop me another message, i love it when people challenge me into thinking.rnrnThanks for the great review

Reviewer: bklyangel Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2009 5:10:49 PM Title: Map Me With Bruises

This was seriously hot. I hope you continue the series!

Author's Response: am continuing the series, there is one more part to go so i really hope i'll see you there.rnrnthanks

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2009 4:30:44 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

Next chapter, next part, sequel whatever just more!

Author's Response: lol thanks for the review and yep, on its way! i'm kinda doing this thing where i watch a film of the story inside my head and think up emoting phrases, descriptions ... sex scenes. lol, fun! But it is on its way, in fact i've already written 6500+ words and have decided how they will end and how i will get them there. just need to wait for that 'mood' to come so that i can write it all down, otherwise it'll suck.rnrnsee you soon

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 4:41:13 PM Title: Map Me With Bruises

Ok here we go:-

Hint 1 – definitely eye catching though possibly not everyone’s cup of tea, darker sounding than ‘the marks of his affection’ *marks* could be taken as anything whereas *bruises* well, self explanatory really! Conclusion - Both titles fine with me!

Hint 2 – yes

Hint 3 – shorter fic – proportions of content just fine!

Hint 4 – make you feel about saying.....great fic? [not enough?]........ sends chocolates?.....Logan?..........Logan covered in chocolate?........are you feeling better yet??

Hint 5 - *that* scene was [trying to think of right word.....see hint 2]

Hint 6 – more understanding the emotions behind the actions in this one – still angsty and yet in the same breath it’s not - just like the first one – depends on what you like reading.

Hope you’re cracking on with the next part [am not a patient person] I don’t read anything until it’s completed - I made an exception – don’t make me regret it!!!!!

Well done x

Author's Response: lol you're the second person who addresed my hints like this ... god i love you lol. yeah, it's a bit suggestive but the story was getting darker so ... But i'm glad you likernrnlol about hint two - i giggle snorted, and found it slightly painful.rnrnthanks for putting me at ease about the length, in the last one i had 10,000+ words to play around with. but this one just ended up finshing at this length and it felt as if it needed nothing more despite my best efforts.rnrnooo ... I'll email you with my address about where to send choclate covered logan. i only like milk chocolate though. you know you've made it when a fellow Roganer is willing to send you logan right? lolrnrnyes in a yes it was mean kind of way?rnrni know what you mean, which is why i even forgot to lable the 1st part as angst at it just didn't strike me as full angst, it just felt like life - something bad happened, and they're trying to deal. not pure angst really.rnrnoh yeah, my fingers are locking together with all the typing i'm doing (not kidding) and since you made an exception for me I'll give you the first official statement. only one other person, unofficially, knows this so ... Part 3 will be called 'Feels Like Suffocation, Baby.' rnrnwhat do you think? and no! i know ive been a bit leniant with the sex scenes and how far Logan misbehaves but i'll tell you right now that Logan isn't into strangulation lol ... or is he? ...

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 11:01:44 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

You truly are a story whore and I am you number one customer or clients. Not really all that acquainted with pimping lingo. lol xXx

P.s. Oh and the almost bum sex scene was great.

Author's Response: don't worry, your pimpin lingo (though it's pimpin nt pimping) is spot on. i should know lol. i've never been happier to get called a whore.rnrnlol ... the things you can admit to online. thanks see you at the next installment

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 7:44:04 AM Title: Map Me With Bruises

Great installment to your series, and I can't wait to read the next part. I'm especially enjoying your characterizations of Logan and Marie. I love how your Logan is all dark and possessive and vulnerable and devoted; I love how your Marie is able to step back and make the big decisions for them even when she's young, inexperienced, and in love. The sex scenes were raw and delicious - more please! Can't wait to read what your cooking up for us next.

Author's Response: thanks, i love 'em too. well you'll see more of them - gah no hints - in part 3. working real hard on that one, its goin well, i just hope that i can make people see every point of view - was that a hint? and thanks about the sex scenes. i've read a few real good ones and i couldn't seem to ever get as graphic as them without either bursting into nervous giggles or sounding kinda like a kinky novel about devilish dukes. so i kept it like this, hopefully i got it right.

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