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Oooohhhh....
Is Wolfbane going to be Sabretooth's meat for this story....
Let the estrogen war begin!!
Oh, very nice. I love the play between the groups. I also found it curious about female alphas. Let's hope wolfsbane doesn't decide to go into heat. That'd be a kicker right in the middle of a stakeout.
~Mia
I was so happy to see this update! Really loving the interaction between Victor and Logan. More please!
AWESOME
cant wait to read more
Dude! I think you used the wrong one! Mine looks all different... did I send you back the wrong version?
But still fun to read Victor being snarky and Logan 'trying' to hold him back :-)
Hope all is well and hugs!
M
Author's Response: OH MY GOD! I think I did. I think I forgot to save your edited copy over mine!!! LOL. That is how things have been going lately! Ok, I got to fix that. Hope I still have the email!
Glad to see your back with another dose of Kick Ass!Rogue. I like how you're balancing out all of these new mutants too. It's doesn't feel like it's too much, which is very nice.
Only thing, I don't want to be snarky, but the overuse of the word "slowly" was kind of distracting. Maybe it would help if you took a break in between writing & editing/posting. I find that I run into the same type of problem when I write. Sometimes a word just wants to set up camp in your brain.