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Reviewer: seargentlambchop Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2010 3:48:19 AM Title: Friend Or Feral

Oooohhhh....

Is Wolfbane going to be Sabretooth's meat for this story....

Let the estrogen war begin!!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2010 8:51:45 AM Title: Friend Or Feral

Oh, very nice. I love the play between the groups. I also found it curious about female alphas. Let's hope wolfsbane doesn't decide to go into heat. That'd be a kicker right in the middle of a stakeout.

~Mia

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 8:58:39 PM Title: Friend Or Feral

I was so happy to see this update! Really loving the interaction between Victor and Logan. More please!

Reviewer: Princesakarlita411 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 1:49:57 AM Title: Friend Or Feral

AWESOME
cant wait to read more

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 1:39:50 AM Title: Friend Or Feral

Dude! I think you used the wrong one! Mine looks all different... did I send you back the wrong version?

But still fun to read Victor being snarky and Logan 'trying' to hold him back :-)

Hope all is well and hugs!
M

Author's Response: OH MY GOD! I think I did. I think I forgot to save your edited copy over mine!!! LOL. That is how things have been going lately! Ok, I got to fix that. Hope I still have the email!

Reviewer: sahara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2010 8:13:09 PM Title: Friend Or Feral

Glad to see your back with another dose of Kick Ass!Rogue. I like how you're balancing out all of these new mutants too. It's doesn't feel like it's too much, which is very nice.

Only thing, I don't want to be snarky, but the overuse of the word "slowly" was kind of distracting. Maybe it would help if you took a break in between writing & editing/posting. I find that I run into the same type of problem when I write. Sometimes a word just wants to set up camp in your brain.

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