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Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 12:16:15 AM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Yay, Vic's back! :)
and Rogue's developed an attitude and trusts no-one else, cool.

Hope you've recovered from that flu!

Author's Response: I am feeling better, thank you. And I am posting the next chapter now.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 5:30:17 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Brilliant. I rather love this one. Thanks.

~Mia

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and the review!! I am working on the next chapter now!

Reviewer: 3togetready Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 4:49:33 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Wow! What a great chapter! I'm loving the idea of Logan, Jubilee, Piotr, and Warren working together to find Rogue. They should make a really interesting team.

Rogue's conversation with Havoc was great. I just keep hoping that Scott will return...I always think that he and Rogue make great friends. He's such a perfect balance to Logan's wilder rougher personality.

As much as I love Logan and know he and Sabertooth have never gotten along all that well, this was probably my favorite two lines: She smiled slowly, realizing that this man alone would give her all the back-up she could ever need. “I’ll be her second. And if you don’t like it… well, I could always use your bones to pick my teeth.”
That was so great! Pyro needs to be put in his place and they're just the ones to do it! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: I didn't want to team Logan up with the usual people. Shadowcat, Icestick, Storm. Since it's continuing from the movies, I wanted to use characters that weren't really developed that much so that I could build off of their characters. I think Warren is really the only one who you get a sense of in the last movie, but not really enough to consider him an established character. And the other two, well, I don't remember Piotr having any lines and Jubilee had what, one head shot during the funeral. Perfect for establishing a team without any OC's.rnrnAt this point, I am not planning on Scott returning. Just like you, I've always felt there was grounds for a great friendship between the two, but I have a lot on my plate that I need to deal with. rnrnAs for with Sabretooth. Well, at this point, Logan has not proved that he is really all that reliable. Sabretooth has. I wanted to show that she trusts him, and, at this point, he's the only person she trusts, including Logan.rnrnThanks for the review!!!!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 1:47:57 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Is there some UST gonna happen between Rogue and Victor? Hows Logan gonna fit in with this? Can Rogue keep em from killin each other?

Author's Response: No UST between Victor and Rogue. Maybe in another story, but I'm just not ready for that yet. I am thinking about something between her and another character, though. Not sure how I am going to work it out yet. And I've got something big planned for Logan. As for anyone being able to keep the two from killing each other, well, we will just have to wait and see!!! Thanks for the review and keep reading!!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 10:34:49 AM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Ooooh I like your Vic really really like him!

Author's Response: Thanks! He's always been one of my favorite X-Men villans and I wanted to use him as an almost good guy in this. (He will never completely change, you know)

Reviewer: ashmo21 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 3:13:05 AM Title: a funeral and a revelation

This was absolutely lovely!! I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter now!!!! Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 3:04:03 AM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Pyro needs to realise something : what he just did and said makes him more childish then anyone else there. I love kick-ass Rogue, who is not a bitch just for the fun of it. She has a reason to be one. And please, make the X-Man grovel ;-)

Author's Response: There will be tons of groveling, especially with what I have planned. And, yeah, Pyro's a pussy in this one. As much as I usually like the character, I want to go in a different direction with him than I did in my other stories. Thanks for the review and keep reading!!!!!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 10:24:45 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

ooooohhhhh, i love it!

I wonder if her telling Hacok that info was to cause a split in the team she's forming already, setting up some plot of her own while she's doing Raven's dirty work.

and i can't wait to see what happens when Wolverine and Creed face off later in this story! damn, Logan is going to be so confused LOL!

excellent stuff! hope the next update is soon!

Author's Response: Actually, there is already a subtle rift happening, but that will come into play later, and I will tell you, it's not a good thing for Rogue at all.rnrnAnd there is going to be major confusion coming on both sides. rnrnWill update as soon as possible, but I am fighting the flu right now. Thanks for reading and the feedback!!!!

Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 9:10:11 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

wonderful chapter! such a great story to update! I loved it. How much longer till they find her?

Author's Response: It's coming soon, but there is going to be at least another two chapters before it happens. Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: tamisnead Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 8:22:58 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Really loving this story! It just about made my day to see an update.Would love to see more Victor/Rogue interaction. Please keep u the great work!

Author's Response: So glad to hear that. And there's going to be more in the next chapter!!! Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 8:18:25 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

:-) Like it. More please xXx

Author's Response: Soon, soon, I promise!!!

Reviewer: VIIIMMV Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 7:29:28 PM Title: a funeral and a revelation

Love it!! Love your Vic. Keep it coming.

Author's Response: He's going to have a bigger part in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!!!!

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