Really liking this story, can't wait for more

I'm surprised that Victor's willing to fight to help Rogue, given that he's got the suppresion collar on and they could hurt him pretty bad without his healing factor working. I hope we get given a reason later on, or maybe he just likes the fight?

Would also like to know what he's been doing in there for 3yrs? It seems an awful long time to keep him only to plan to kill him off once he's served as sperm donor!

Oh, and how come the Dr(s) never noticed before that the guards were abusing Rogue if they were regularly doing tests/experiments on her? And why does Rogue believe the guards when they say that they used protection when she knows they didn't? The Dr should have known she'd had the 'depo shot' anyway.
Just some incosistencies that bothered me ;-)

Looking forward to where this goes next.. I can't imagine Victor being able to put up being caged in with someone for a whole 2mths!
Logan better find and spring them before that ;-)

Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for all the feedback. It's a great support system when you're questioning your own writing. I'm hoping that this next chapter will clear a lot up about why he's being so nice to her and hasn't, you know, killed or maimed her yet.rnrnWhy they kept him alive will be cleared up in a little bit, but I'm not giving away anything, yet. ;PrnrnAs for the inconsistancies, the only one who hasn't known about these things was really Dr. Saunders, basically because he's in charge. One of those guys who doesn't care what happens or how the job gets done, just as long as it does. Such as with how the guards were treating the female prisoners and whether or not there was a method of birth control. For him, contriception is an after thought. These people aren't supposed to be caged together, so what's the point? It's not until she's thrown into the cell with Victor that the good doctor, as I like to call him, really starts understanding just what kind of possibility he has. I hope that clears up a few things for you.rnrnAgain, thanks for the feedback and keep reading! things are about to get real interesting!

I'm really enjoying this story and I hope you are able to finish soon. I realy can't wait to see where it goes.

Author's Response: I am working on the next chapter now, but I think it will be awhile before this one is finished. Not sure how far it's going to go, but I won't abandon this one. Thanks for the fb!!!

wow this is an interesting new take on the lab. Instead of Logan and Rogue we have Victor and Rogue. Hmmmm..... i like this new idea. I can't wait to find out what you have planned next. Though I do hope Logan gets there soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. And Logan will get there... eventually. I have a little more planned for our favorite girl before I reunite her with her man.