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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 8:00:28 PM Title: thin security and an unlikely truce

wow, victor being kinda nice? shocking and definitely has me intrigued.

and you can kinda hear logan in his voice, the way he speaks. makes sense since they, in pretty much all X-men universes, they have a bond, even if it's creepy.

Author's Response: I wanted to make him the much scarier Logan, although Rogue will NOT have the same relationship with him.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 8:40:21 PM Title: thin security and an unlikely truce

Yay, Victor!
So happy to have him in this story :)

You'll have to explain at some point why he didn't just kill Rogue, but I'm thinking he doesn't like the way the guards threw her in to him like they're feeding a steak to a wild animal, and maybe he's also lonely from being caged up.

I love how she's already annoying him with her all her yapping !

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 8:38:36 AM Title: thin security and an unlikely truce

I'd stick with Vic too.

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with that.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 7:14:38 AM Title: thin security and an unlikely truce

Just thought I'd review and tell you that this chapter is great. xXx

Author's Response: Thank you for the review on this chapter. I actually figured this one would get over looked since I posted the next chapter at the same time.

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