The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Ok, first, great short. Very angsty. makes you really feel for Logan.
Next: Love the sneak peek. Can't wait to see what you do for it. Not sure how the title is going to work, though, but it looks like it's going to be a good one when you get it all up. And I hope you don't make to many changes to what you just gave us. :)
Author's Response: Hmm, the title? what about it? I'm having reservations about it too, it feels too revealing but what did you find wrong about it? and thanks for the lovely review