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Date: 10/09/2012 3:43:40 AM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
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Date: 01/01/2011 9:42:25 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Um. I love you. Now im gonna read every word you've written on this site. Lol i love this story
Date: 09/28/2009 8:39:47 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Fabulous story..enjoyed it a lot. I thought it was neat how you changed things around a bit with these two and it wasn’t about their usual guilt trips-his age issue- cuz he very deliberately went after this younger Marie (loved the waiting for her in her room part..very hot)..and her skin. I liked how her skin really wasn’t important for either of them..the fact that it wasn’t even a second thought for him..might have made her feel even more comfortable. I also liked how she didn’t shy away or start to withdraw whenever he touched her bare skin, even with the inevitable consequence..esp. since he apparently liked to do it a lot LOL.
-And yeah, Logan’s kind of promiscuous ways were mentioned..but the other women/Jean weren’t really even really a blip on the radar..it was a nice change that it was more about Logan having to endure Marie’s other guy (esp. since that luckily didn’t progress too much :P
This Logan totally reminded me of Expectations Logan..the desperately Marie-needing Logan..one of my faves. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2009 9:48:24 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Have you ever read 'Once Upon a Time' --Becca a.k.a. DutchXfan
It sounds just like the typr of story you said you enjoy in you end notes. http://www.loganandmarie.com/query_result.php?id=30
Btw, you know I love this!
Author's Response: yep, devoured all her stories, in fact all the stories on logan and marie, including yellow brick road. and yep lol, hi to you here too and thanks
Date: 05/28/2009 4:12:38 AM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
I really like this kinda story dark but with a little light at the end...
Author's Response: does that mean that in my story there is light at the end or that i should have one? just a lil confused - may be coz i'm high on lack of sleep ... thanks for the review :)
Author's Response: does that mean that in my story there is light at the end or that i should have one? just a lil confused - may be coz i'm high on lack of sleep ... thanks for the review :)
Date: 05/27/2009 10:48:03 AM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Oh how I love a little walk on the dark side - especially if it's Logan’s dark side! Rational thought and behaviour going out of the window in favour of the more animalistic possessiveness - wanting, needing and therefore taking. I for one have no problem with this side of him!
Loved Rogue’s internal indecision throughout despite knowing the truth all along even if slightly hidden through youth and inexperience.
“While she’s still muddling through ’want’ and learning what it means, he has sped his way through ’need’ and is somewhere much, much further.” 5 stars for that one it was such a strong line.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this - my one and only criticism would be the ending –
‘I won’t leave, not ever Logan’
‘Promise?’
The fic for me finished here and did not need the last paragraph. I’m desperately trying to put into words the reason why, and how to explain it but up until that point it was about the darkness/the possession/the truth and then suddenly humour? It just spoilt the tone you’d built up throughout. I really can’t explain it which doesn’t help much I know! And it’s only my opinion which probably counts for nothing so just ignore me!
Great fic. Well done x
p.s. Nothing wrong with soft core porn title's so how long do we have to wait for Logan and Marie; Rough and Loving it ;)
Author's Response: there is nothing wrong with a lil cave in our man lol. makes for great sex. oh thanks about the line, i was a bit worried that it made Marie sound bad, i knew what i wanted to get across but i didn't know if i had managed it. but there we go, one person gets my ramblings. and wooohoo! five stars.rnrnthanks, i really wanted it to get across that marie is seventeen, b/cuz thats a great plot point right? it gives you so much to play with. and i didn't want to take the easy way out and say well, she's mature because of the voices in her head - you'll see why in part 2 - i didn't want to give 'someone' an excuse ... no, dnt want to ruin it until i know your okay with that.rnrnah, the ending, i know what you mean. that was because of a few things basically. 1stly, this wasn't supposed to be angsty - i know, didn't manage that did i? i wrote it to be a stress relieving PWP with a happy ending, then it somehow got all dark and plot riddled. and i wanted to give them a few happy moments b/cus otherwise there wouldn't be any point in them being together, if all they had was bad moments then at least marie would have left him. its because they know that throughout their rather bleak future they'll have moments like this that they are together - hence i had to put in a happy to show that. but i know what you mean, it felt a lil strange to me as well until i strung it together with part 2 and noticed that it was needed. VERY NEEDED lol spoliler!rnrnand the humour, don't you think it feels a lil dark though? or did i not put that across well? him making her promise to stay no matter what? well, you'll understand more about that in part 2 anyway.rnrnand NO! You're opinion matters a lot, if it didn't i wouldn't have bothered writing such a long reply. i love it when people make me think and challenge me, helps me write better.rnrnlol i totally agree about the soft porn - and part 2 is up, part 3 is doing real well, got all the kinks worked out. planned another ... controversial (perhaps - for some, for me - yes) sex scene. thought out some great lines. some fantastic angst and uh ... cant say anymore.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2009 12:23:33 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Wow. this is going on my favorites list, if for no other reason than it hits VERY CLOSE to home. The situations were so true to life, it took me right back to when I was 17 and involved in a similar situation with an older guy. I love the complex relationship you have drawn between Logan and Rogue. It's that fine line Logan walks between love/posessiveness and outright obsession that made this story so fascinating. Nice to see Rogue fully fleshed out and complex as well. Great job! Now about those other stories you're witholding from us...
Author's Response: yay for favorite list! yeh, you've got logan spot on, he's built his whole world around her, note that he doesn't seem to hav much to do at the mansion. and yes, making Rogue a likable, fleshed out character was very important to me. most readers - me included - tend to really focus on the males and when they do focus on females you dnt tend to find them likable, so i really worked to make it not so with marie otherwise this story wouldn't have worked. so i'm glad it worked for you. lol, next part will be posted asap. and the 3rd part is already 6500+ words long so it's coming along well.
Date: 05/25/2009 4:14:36 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Kudos on a PWP fic with one hell of a plot. I'm so excited to hear that you have more installments in the works! I will be checking obsessively for your posts.
Author's Response: Thanks :) rnrni cant seem to be able to write plain PWPs so hence the birth of plot lol. and yes, it will be up asap
Date: 05/25/2009 9:42:36 AM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
Yay thank you. xXx (x)- extra kiss for greatness.
Author's Response: kiss taken lol
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2009 9:19:39 AM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
I think that seeing as how you've got "The Gift" of being able to keep writing with out stopping then it's your obligation to keep writing so that losers like me have some source of entertainment one long boring days like these. xXx
Author's Response: lol will write then just to elevate your boredom. part 2 of this fic will be up soon
Date: 05/25/2009 4:00:42 AM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
I agree with the last review... to read some of these scenes - it was almost uncomfortable. Yet what woman, comfortable in her own skin, doesn't want to be wanted so completely. It was well done, the intensity, the passion, how he consumed and overwhelmed her, and how at the end she still held on to the power. I liked that he was more vulnerable than he likes to show, and she's stronger than she thinks. Wow, wonderfully done; one of my favorites.
Author's Response: Rogan reviwers are fab, I nearly always get wonderfully long reviews from them. i think we're just born that way lol. lol if it was uncomfortable to read just imagine how it felt to write them - i was like, am i really going to post this? is it even ... allowed? lol. thank you, that is something that i really wanted to get across, that Logan is weaker then he would like to admit and Marie has more power then she even knows. he may push her but it's nearly always when she lets him do so. like when she decided to give bobby the chance to tempt her away from him, she even let him kiss her, and the fact that it's her who tells logan that they'll avoid each other for the next few months.rnrnshe has a lot of control over him and he knows it too, he doesn't even say anything even though he stops going into her room knowing that bobby was being invited in. she's powerful in a subtle way.rnrnthanks for the lovely review and see you soon at the next one.
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2009 11:21:56 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
You certainly know how to threaten a review out of a woman :0
Enjoyed it immensely, even if I was somewhat uncomfortable with your Logan. His disregard for consent worried me; his selfishness appalled me. You redressed that a little in the last paras by showing something of his fear of losing her; before that, he came across as an obsessive brute. Sexy as all get out, though :(
Marie, I liked. Her vacillation between silly teenage Marie and a more grown up version was very in character, I thought - knowing she should be scared of Logan was wise. Knowing she didn't really WANT to say no, so should just try to stay the hell away, makes a lot of sense in that x1 verse.
Interesting that this started as a PWP, because your strongest moments describe emotion, rather than action. I'm not knocking the sex scenes, they're fine, but they simply don't compare with the few paras where you describe how they FEEL about each other:
“Is it time now?” she asks, desolate and hopeful at the same time. Because as much as she knows her future is with him, as much as she knows that she loves him with all her being, a little part of her is also scared. He doesn’t love her like she loves him. She loves him like ice cream on a sultry Mississippi day, like a rocking chair for 80-year-old bones. Like getting to know him and learning to love him and looking up baby names secretly but never telling him.
He loves her like he wants to burn her up and cover himself with her ashes. Like he wants to steal her away and let no one touch her and die with her because he can’t imagine living without her.
While she’s still muddling through ’want’ and learning what it means, he has sped his way through ’need’ and is somewhere much, much further."
.... truly masterful, and the true action in this story.
Author's Response: lol I'm a review hog ... it makes my world go round. i stare at them on the screen and say don't need food when you have reviews! see, you get to read my fic and thin my waist at the same time!rnrnlol i know - sexy as hell right. although yeah ... i was a lil worried about how some would take the consent thing. he's rough and marie knows it - he only gets rougher in the 2nd part (soon to be posted), or maybe he doesn't. you can tell me once you've read it. he's like a man with a 15 year olds mind at times, someone once said to me, cept since he's got a man's body that can be a lil ... dangerous? too strong a word? rnrnthanks, i'm really proud of my marie. normally us girls love the guy and don't much like or care for the girl. but i put a lot of work into making her likable, otherwise this fic wouldn't work, so i'm glad you did. yeah, she's very knowledgeable, she understands how people tick, knows how she ticks too.rnrnawww shucks ... thanks *blushes* sometimes i go through the crap i'm emoting and think wther ppl will actually get it so i'm glad you mentioned that. yeah, it did start out with the intention of being a PWP but i can't seem to write a story without delving too deep. just like i can't seem to write a bad guy without making him human, and flawed and kind of pitiable - an annoying habbit of mine.rnrnwell, i loved your review - shed a 1mm of the waist just gloating over it. see you soon at the next part hopefully
Date: 05/24/2009 9:03:40 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
That ending was just perfect, I'm glad that's what the story was leading up to. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. :)rnPart 2 on it's way so stay close
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2009 7:46:23 PM Title: The Marks Of His Affection
I actually really liked this story. The darkness of it and the possessiveness. Great job, and I would have loved to see how far you were going to go with this, and if you had a breaking point for Marie in mind. She was obviously self concious about the other women Logan had been with before her, and about if he would get bored with her. I would have loved to see how you touched on both these subjects. I think that everyone is a little afraid of their significant other getting bored of them at one point or another in any relationship. I wonder what he would have said or done had she spoken about her fears.
Again, great story!!!!
Author's Response: Oh Marie has breaking points. In fact this was meant to be a one shot but due to demands (not quite enough to be popular but vigirous demands nonethless) I had to write 2 more parts. I will be posting part 2 in a couple of days and part three is being written right now. so trust me, being insecure over his past lovers is the least of marie's problems. rnrni dunno ... did you feel like it was unresolved? I kinda felt like it was dealt with when she said that it was pointless to be upset at something he hadn't done yet. did you think it should be resolved? arn't we women gona be fearful no matter what they say or how they soothe us?rnrnThanks for your great review. :)