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[Report This]Date: 12/02/2013 6:16:42 AM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
Fun, fun, fun!! Loved the letters, rogues getting ready for him, and especially the end. Just yum! Fantastic!
Date: 09/29/2011 9:27:06 AM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
Hawt and funny! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2009 2:14:09 PM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
Ganna Add it to my Favourites. xXx
Date: 05/20/2009 8:18:22 AM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
No offense, but, have you ever had a bikini wax? There are no stirrups, no pricks of blood. Honey? if this was the experience you had, you need a new esthetician!
Loved how you wrote this, very real life...not that I don't enjoy it when multiple orgasms are written for Rogue before Logan even begins to feel the stirrings of his own release; but this was much more realistic, more true to life. We all know how talented he is, and yes they have all night!! *tee hee hee* Nice work!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have, indeed, gotten a bikini wax, but only once. The salon I went to did have stirrups on the waxing bed, so I was just writing from that one time. I guess that's not the norm though. When it comes to the blood...well, I don't remember if I had any, so I have no excuse for that! Perhaps I was just channeling 40 Year Old Virgin. :)
Date: 05/20/2009 4:47:31 AM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
aw that was sweet! and funny, hehe, poor rogue, all the things jubilee puts her through.... ^^
just for the record, i don't think anyone would mind if you wrote the uhh bang like a drum part in a next chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2009 12:40:58 AM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
Well done! And I didn't notice 'anxiety' at all, so don't sweat it. Great steamy sex, humor, anxiety enough to keep the tension up.... great story.
Did I just use anxiety? LOL!
Date: 05/19/2009 11:16:49 PM Title: Hey-la Hey-la, my boyfriend's back
Lightning bolt, lol!
Mmmm... nummy Logan. =D
And thanks for the tip - I'll try uploading next time instead of copy & pasting the text. =D
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2009 10:52:00 AM Title: I can see him comin so I better get-a-runnin
space coma? Yeah I get them a lot too. Mainly about Wolverine too. hmm... must be contagious. xXx
Date: 05/19/2009 1:22:18 AM Title: I can see him comin so I better get-a-runnin
oooh this is so good! i loved the flirty letters...and the dancing... hehe ^^
update soon please :)
Date: 05/18/2009 11:11:07 PM Title: I can see him comin so I better get-a-runnin
lol. I can imagine the flip flops her stomach would be doing for the rest of the month.
And how the heck did you do the indents?! I've been trying to figure that out...
Author's Response: It depends: I use Microsoft Word to write, so I just hit "Tab" like you normally would (you know, like when you use your PC to write something other than WxR love scenes :)). But the key is that when I'm finished, I save it as a Web Document (it will have .html at the end of the file name) and I upload it to the site as such. If you are copying and pasting your story into the big box they provide there might be some sort of code that would indent, but I don't know what that would be.rnThanks for the review!
Date: 05/18/2009 10:04:16 PM Title: I can see him comin so I better get-a-runnin
oh, so very exciting!
can't wait for more
:)
Date: 05/18/2009 9:50:30 PM Title: I can see him comin so I better get-a-runnin
I hope you continue this! Just enough of a tease...argh! Please don't leave us hanging...