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Date: 06/05/2011 9:26:50 PM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

What is Marie planning. I'm worried she is putting herself in a position that could let her fall into Magneto's grasp and put everyone else in more danger. I surely hope not. I hope her plan works, however I know that Logan will be furious with her when he finds out that she put herself and others in danger to protect him. Please update soon. You still have fans out here who are interested in what's going to happen next. Me especially.

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Date: 06/05/2011 9:16:24 PM Title: I Found My Strength The Very Day That I Found You

Another great chapter as always. Marie and Logan are such a great couple. They are perfect for each other, while still not being to perfect. They have problems, but they are their for each other. Great job.

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Date: 06/05/2011 9:07:16 PM Title: Girl Who Dries Your Tears When They're Falling

A very well written chapter. Logan's reactions were true to form in my opinion. A great chapter. I can't to see what else you have planned for our couple.

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Date: 06/05/2011 8:37:36 PM Title: I Wish I Could Say To You...It's Gonna Be All Right

Marie's a smart cookie in one regard. Magneto could snap Logan in half. However i sure hope she let's Logan know she cares about him before he goes off to face Magneto. If not she'd regret it for the rest of her life, if something did happen to Logan. Plus I'm curious to when Marie is going to get around to telling Logan about his past. I'm sure Logan would be eager to learn whatever he could since he's been searching for years to find even the small clue.

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Date: 06/05/2011 8:26:29 PM Title: All That I Have To Give And More

I know Marie might care about what others think, but I'm a little worried Logan might, and try to distance himself for Marie's sake. I hope they can work things out for the both of their sakes. I like the bond they share as well as the idea of others sharing the same type of bond. Great idea. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 8:11:17 PM Title: When I Am With You I Feel Flames Again

Another great chapter. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 7:59:58 PM Title: She Lives On Disillusion Road

Go Marie, I loved how she stood up to
Scott. The girl has got backbone.

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Date: 06/05/2011 7:50:06 PM Title: Run For Your Life If You Can, Little Girl

Great job, again. If Sabertooth has clear memories about him and Logan, then will Marie have them, and be able to clue Logan in to his past, and if so will he go out searching for answers that some of her knowledge will give him clues to? I can't wait to read more.

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Date: 06/05/2011 7:39:54 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

Great chapter. I thought the motorcycle scene went well. In fact if you think about it, it could motivate Marie to move past the free of never having touching and isolating herself to giving her asense of freedom and courage to be able to face her fears, which can be just as invigorating. Keep up the great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 7:24:54 PM Title: Hanging All Her Hopes On The Stars

Aww, poor Marie. Thankfully Logan isn't scared of her, or her mutation. I think this was a very nice chapter, corniness and all. :D

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Date: 06/05/2011 12:02:12 PM Title: They Call Her Mississippi

Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad Logan didn't make Marie go back with Storm and Scott. Great work.

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Date: 06/05/2011 11:55:50 AM Title: Second Chance To Make A First Impression

Great beginning.

Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2010 11:11:27 PM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

DAMNIT! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2009 9:46:14 PM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

oooo plz update this soon!

Reviewer: LeeMinKyo Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2009 3:14:52 PM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

Hello!!

Well, the first thing I must to say is that i´m spanish and my english sucks, so please forget and forgive all me grammar mistakes.

Oh my... your fanfic is simply amazing. I´m really impressed. I have registered in the web because I want to write this review. I started your fic like 2 hours ago and... wow! It´s like read a VERY GOOD version of the movie.

In a lot of fanfics the writers don´t catch the essence of the characters, but in your I can feel the true Marie and Logan, and that "something" special between them.

I´ll read you until the end, and pleaseeee update this story soon because I have no more nails to bite and I´m starting with the finger xDD.

I want to quote a lot of phrase, because I´m feeling a lot of things all the time I read some special phrases, but there are so much...

Thank you, really, thank you for this amazing story. I´ll search more stories in your profile.

PLEASE GIVE ONE MORE CHAP! XD

Reviewer: Ninka Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2009 11:27:09 AM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

Im from Slovakia:) hope you know where it is:D people always make mistake and say "Slovenia"...but its not the same.
And Oh My God I need to write that Im always thinking about this story and reading it all again from beginning:)

Reviewer: Silvereyes Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2009 10:50:51 AM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

OMG! I love this whole thing! It's driving me nuts waiting for these other chapters. You are an amazing writer and the plot is absolutely great. I love the whole bond they have. It's... CUTE! *giggles* Hope you get more chapters up soon! I'm dying to read them.

Author's Response: thank you for your comment, you're too nice to me lolrnand I'm sorry I'm always taking forever with updating, I write too slowly...and I recently found myself an awesome beta *nudges her + grins* soo the chapters I haven't posted yet will be worked on and improved, but it'll also take some more time until they're up. sorry :( rnI hope you'll stick around anyway ;)

Reviewer: Ninka Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 1:53:44 PM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

Waw...I really love your story:)
The way you desribe bond between Rogue and Logan...it´s perfect!!!
im not from english speaking country but I love to read this story:) You´ve got a talent!
Keep writing please!:)

Author's Response: aw thank you! :) which country are you from?

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 9:35:23 AM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

Sorry it took me so long to read and review. I love this. I like the John/Bobby thing you've got going on. I love the idea of the three of them going to help the Actual X-Team. It would be totally great if some of the other Junior X-Men could go, but *shrugs* I'll be happy with whatever I get. I also love the idea of Logan giving her a quick 'charge'. That's really awesome.

Author's Response: hehe...John/Bobby....*giggles*....my obsession with them borders on unhealthy lately lol.rnI was thinking about taking Kitty and Jubes along and would have liked that a lot, but it would have been a little too crowded and confusing, I think....I don't know....plus Marie didn't want to ask them, so what could I do ;)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2009 4:16:26 PM Title: And "I'd Give My Life For Yours"

Ohh no. Why does this seem like a really bad idea. Hope Marie don't get hurt. I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: yeah she does have bad ideas every once in a while...*whistle* but Logan is always around to help, so no worries ^^

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 12:48:09 PM Title: A Journey I Just Don't Have A Map For

motorcycle scene was awesome, dont worry about it

Author's Response: thank you :) I actually tried that thing I wrote about while I was sitting on the back of a regular bicycle yesterday..it was pretty fun, though probably scary as hell if anyone's actually going motorcycle-like speed and not just like 5 mph hehe

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 8:35:46 PM Title: I Found My Strength The Very Day That I Found You

Ahhh! I got a shout out. Yay! this is great, just a little bit of heat and a lot bit of confusion. You're doing great! I like how Logan struggles with himself, and Marie knows instinctivly how to cmfort him. Or does she have a little help from Inner-Logan?

Author's Response: it's probably a bit of both, but in my head they're just so close to each other by now that they just know a lot of things... *happy sigh* ah the romance. lol

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 7:17:07 PM Title: I Found My Strength The Very Day That I Found You

Aww that was beautiful. Love Logan struggling with this and knowing that he needs Marie. This story is wonderful!

Author's Response: thank you! :) it felt very important to write how much he needs her too, because he's the one who always saves her and stuff, so it's pretty obvious she needs him, but it's just the same the other way around :)

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 1:45:49 AM Title: Girl Who Dries Your Tears When They're Falling

*grins* This was awesome. I haven't seen Origins yet, but this is pretty much what I learned from the trailers. They don't disguise anything anymore. Great stuff. I want more!

Author's Response: aw thank you :) rnyeah the trailers really gave away a lot of the movie...but I'm sure you'll still love it when you see it :Drnmore soon ^^

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 9:50:58 PM Title: Girl Who Dries Your Tears When They're Falling

only mistake you made was that Gambit actually had a plane in the movie, not a helicopter.

but that was a wonderful summation, considering how much Marie had to edit it down into something that would work for the story. good job!

now i'm on to the next chapter so see what happens next!

love this story and how you incorporate X1 and Origins so well!

Author's Response: right, now that you mention it...it was a plane ^^rnthank you sooo much for your reviews :) rnah i'm such a feedback-whore lol rnI hope you'll stick with me and enjoy the chapters to come as well :)rn

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