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Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 6:55:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh no it's not! xXx

Author's Response: hehe.

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 8:27:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

ohhhhhh I want more, please write more. And who was the dig about the chapter posting at hmmmmmmmm

Author's Response: more has come, and more will come again hopefully tonight (tomorrow at the latest). as for the dig... well, i don't like to name names. let's just say if you have a story out there and you haven't posted an update in a while (who's that pointing at me??) then it's about time you got to work. el pronto like.

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 4:35:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

ooh I bet he wants to kiss her though! all that arguing can lead to some serious UST... ;)

Author's Response: lol. amen, sista!

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 3:14:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

WHY DIDN'T HE KISS HER?!!

haha interesting...NEXT chapter please!

Author's Response: ah, have you learned nothing from me? i like to prolong the waiting time for the first kiss!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 3:35:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh, what a lovely chapter! So well written. Nice show of emotion, great humour with the cat in the basket ;) and nice introduction to the rift and hint of intrigue with the hidden message in the paintings!

I like the pace, allows the story to develop :) don't feel you have to deliver us any L + M action sooner than the story would have it!

Author's Response: thanks for the review. i'm trying not to rush anything-- but, yeah, it's hard. i want to get down to the good stuff as much other people want to read it. :)

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 1:38:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

YAHHHHHHHHHHHH you went with my idea *does a little happy dance* I love the cat bit with Erik, I was cracking up when reading it lol. Cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: haha. glad you enjoyed it. i told ya in your last review that you had it pretty head on with your suggestion!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 11:09:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

Amelia is the name of my favourite teddy bear. xXx

Author's Response: :) if i do my job right, from now on, you'll start thinking about my version of Amelia when you look at your teddy. ;)

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 10:45:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

I like the way Logan and his grandmother finally talked... I wonder what's going to happen with Logan and Marie, and with Marie and Erik... Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: the next chapter should accomplish the story set up, and you'll know exactly which direction the story goes and how the title fits in. as for Logan and his grandmother... thanks. considering logan is notorious for having no family, I wasn't sure how the talk between the two would work out. but they did need to talk.

Reviewer: calemzoe Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 10:25:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

Nice start. Are you going to have Logan pursuing Marie in this one? That would be hot, especially since they are so different from one another. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: well, marie was the focus of SoA. this time I want to give POVs from other characters as well so that it's not all about her. as for whether Logan will be pursing Marie instead of the other way around... well, I won't give any details away but the story summary should pretty much answer that question for you. Besides, we all know that Logan loves a good hunt. :D

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 7:17:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is AWESOME. I am loving this. Logan and Marie are so complex. I love that Amalia just described Marie to a T in this chapter.

MORE MORE MORE

Author's Response: thanks alesia. glad to hear that you're liking this one so far! more will be coming very soon.

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 6:03:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

OMGS hurry up with the next chapters please!!

going great!

Author's Response: i'll be working on the next chapter today. that doesn't mean it'll be finished today.... but i'll be working on it. ;)

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 7:09:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to seeing where this goes. :)

Author's Response: hah, me too. =D

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 5:37:02 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oooooooo I hope Logan turns up at the hospital when Erik's trying to get the paintings, I can just see the look on his face when Marie tells him that Logan is the only living relitive lol

Great story cant wiat for more

Author's Response: hey! you just summed up chapter three. phooey. :P

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 10:22:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very fun chapter :D

Your comparisons of Marie to celery, peanut butter, and pistachio ice-cream made me laugh!

Nice description of Logan's barely functional cabin.

Great to see Jubilee in this one, she fits right in, right in character, and Erik's role as the mean and scary chair of the dept is just brill!

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback, dawn! I didn't get to try my hand at Jubes in the last story, so I plan on making it up in this one. hopefully i'll do her justice. :D

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 10:11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, new story, yay!

Looks complicated ;)

Author's Response: oh yes. the last one was fun, but i want to add more complexity to this one. we'll see if it works. i am not above ditching this story if it turns to crap on me. lol.

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 3:22:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

...and again with the peanut butter!! ;) well well what can i say, i'm intrigued, still and again. wonder what happened to logan...? oh and you're making very interesting use of erik!

Author's Response: haha! i knew someone would catch the peanut butter reference!! blue ribbon to you for pointing it out. :D

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 12:58:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

And the plot thickens... I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: :) just posted part 3. the plot will continue to thicken. ;)

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 4:04:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

You know this had me in a state of confusion for a few moments then it all came clear. More Please?

Author's Response: just posted the second chapter. ;)

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 12:46:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow, are you going to update soon? cause I know that you should because the current suspense it really really killing me!

Author's Response: hey nicca. just posted chapter two. :D

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 2:28:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ooooo...this is all intriguing! I love your AU stories, speaking of which, I wondered if you were planning on posting the epilogue to Stamp of Approval anytime soon...please?

Melanie

Author's Response: thanks for the compliment! And i know i still need to post the epilogue to SoA. I don't know when i'll have it up, but hopefully soon?

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 9:30:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

oohh, i got some good mental images of swordfish and then australia ^^
a really great first chapter, i hope you update soon =)

Author's Response: jackman/logan in the sun, with water running down his chest? every girl's wet dream. ;)

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 3:49:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really strong start! I love the way I'm already clamoring for more! Keep up the good work! (BTW, are we going to see more to Stamp of Approval, or if not, a sequel?)

Author's Response: hey sweety. thanks for the review! and yes, i've still have to post the epilogue for SoA (but no sequal). Hopefully i'll have the final SoA enstallment out soon.

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