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Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 3:16:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh what a ride! keep it coming with more updates please

Author's Response: they're coming! :D

Reviewer: calemzoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 2:33:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Logan; first the vomit then 'gang-raped' in class! Hopefully he feels better in the next chapter! Heehee

Author's Response: heh. i almost feel bad for him. :)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 6:51:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

LOVE IT!!!

I haven't ever been skydiving either but I think the section did what you wanted it to do which is give us insight as to who Logan is in his professional environment.

The fact the girls were after him just amuses the heck out of me, does this mean that Marie will have to give him a private seminar? Somehow I can completely see his Grandmother setting that up.

Author's Response: great feedback. thanks so much! I wanted to paint a little picture of his work experience, so i'm glad it came over well. and sweety? stop guessing outloud what happens next. you may ruin it for somebody else. =P lol

Reviewer: Wolverines_darlin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 11:30:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Hahahaha omg poor Logan gettin molested in class by nymphomaniacs!! But i dont blame them lol! Damn this story gets better and better everytime! Can not wait to read wat you have planned for the next chapter! Haha loved it

Author's Response: i must say that i sort-of/kind-of/maybe (hah) used our WRFA females as inspiration for the ass grabbing and nipple flicking. i mean, c'mon. it's LOGAN.

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 9:46:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG! Poor Logan! I love that he's starting to really look at his grandfather's artwork, but I also love how uncomfortable he is in his surroundings.

The response to Marie was great too, but the ending really has me giggling at first, then how you stopped just before Marie has a real chance for a reaction... PLEASE start the next chapter with Marie taking control of the class by calling the school dean to the classroom or something!

Author's Response: heh, giggling is good. that's what i wanted. ;) and i'm happy you said what you did about the artwork. i want him to explore it but feel uncomfortably facing his past and his demons. thanks for the feedback!

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