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Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 7:09:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looking forward to seeing where this goes. :)

Author's Response: hah, me too. =D

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 5:37:02 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oooooooo I hope Logan turns up at the hospital when Erik's trying to get the paintings, I can just see the look on his face when Marie tells him that Logan is the only living relitive lol

Great story cant wiat for more

Author's Response: hey! you just summed up chapter three. phooey. :P

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2009 10:22:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very fun chapter :D

Your comparisons of Marie to celery, peanut butter, and pistachio ice-cream made me laugh!

Nice description of Logan's barely functional cabin.

Great to see Jubilee in this one, she fits right in, right in character, and Erik's role as the mean and scary chair of the dept is just brill!

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback, dawn! I didn't get to try my hand at Jubes in the last story, so I plan on making it up in this one. hopefully i'll do her justice. :D

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2009 12:58:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

And the plot thickens... I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: :) just posted part 3. the plot will continue to thicken. ;)

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