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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2010 2:43:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

i wish you would update this, it's just too delicious to let drop!

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 2:33:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amelia cracks me up =D
and mhmmmm private tutoring - I wonder how that'll...come along.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 9:58:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

LOL I love Amelia! She's great!

Author's Response: *smiles* thanks a bunch. she's a fun Yente character to play matchmaker.

Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 7:25:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

LOL, this was great. So... As you can see I finally got around to chapter 10 and 11. *grins* And I saw the privatr toutor a mile ago. *grins* It's fantastic, and one on one time with them will be great!

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback, sweety! but of course you saw it a mile away. you not only are constantly in my head, but i swear you've taken up permanent residency. Apparently my "Keep Out" signs don't phase you one iota. =P

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 10:48:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

ooooh giving Logan a private lesson? hmmm

Author's Response: hmmm in deed. private lessons with Logan makes for a very happy thought.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 9:47:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

Gotta love Miss Amelia. Just gotta!!! Wait until Logan finds out. I can't wait.

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback. i think Logan needs to hear the news soon. Why draw it out? ;)

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 9:29:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

I LOVE AMELIA! She's such a great character! Please, let Logan's conversation with her about the classroom experience be next, as Marie hides in the corner of the room, horror in her face as Logan realizes what Amelia is doing to them... *evil grin* LOL, I LOVE YOU! And I LOVE THIS STORY!

Author's Response: glad you like her! she's the ultimate grandmother figure. spunky and bold. i love her, too. :)

Reviewer: nicca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 3:16:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh what a ride! keep it coming with more updates please

Author's Response: they're coming! :D

Reviewer: calemzoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 2:33:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Logan; first the vomit then 'gang-raped' in class! Hopefully he feels better in the next chapter! Heehee

Author's Response: heh. i almost feel bad for him. :)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2009 6:51:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

LOVE IT!!!

I haven't ever been skydiving either but I think the section did what you wanted it to do which is give us insight as to who Logan is in his professional environment.

The fact the girls were after him just amuses the heck out of me, does this mean that Marie will have to give him a private seminar? Somehow I can completely see his Grandmother setting that up.

Author's Response: great feedback. thanks so much! I wanted to paint a little picture of his work experience, so i'm glad it came over well. and sweety? stop guessing outloud what happens next. you may ruin it for somebody else. =P lol

Reviewer: Wolverines_darlin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 11:30:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Hahahaha omg poor Logan gettin molested in class by nymphomaniacs!! But i dont blame them lol! Damn this story gets better and better everytime! Can not wait to read wat you have planned for the next chapter! Haha loved it

Author's Response: i must say that i sort-of/kind-of/maybe (hah) used our WRFA females as inspiration for the ass grabbing and nipple flicking. i mean, c'mon. it's LOGAN.

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 9:46:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG! Poor Logan! I love that he's starting to really look at his grandfather's artwork, but I also love how uncomfortable he is in his surroundings.

The response to Marie was great too, but the ending really has me giggling at first, then how you stopped just before Marie has a real chance for a reaction... PLEASE start the next chapter with Marie taking control of the class by calling the school dean to the classroom or something!

Author's Response: heh, giggling is good. that's what i wanted. ;) and i'm happy you said what you did about the artwork. i want him to explore it but feel uncomfortably facing his past and his demons. thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2009 9:30:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I nearly wet myself sniggering whilst poor Logan was under attack in the dark! Super humor, thanks for making my night!

Author's Response: so glad you liked it! =)

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 11:34:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sigh. That's what I'm talking about. Right THERE. Wonderful fulfilment to all that UST ...

And "bok bok" made me fall off my chair!

Author's Response: *grins* the call of the smoochies was just too great to be ignored! As for the 'bok bok'... ah hell. i've got to be the only person in the world to have ever referred to lust as hormone chickens. lol. i know. i'm weird. ;)

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 1:06:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

"And from now on, I’ll… behave myself in class.”

oh please don't!


lol that kiss took me off guard and my god was it amazingly hot! Skills man you got skills!!!

Author's Response: *takes a bow* (j/k) thanks for the feedback. I always feel unsure about posting kissing scenes so i'm glad it worked and you guys liked it. I guess that means i should write more of them or something, huh? *grins*

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 11:58:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

ohhh you caught me off-guard with that kiss...so good!! oh boy...
and i hope he won't behave himself ;)

Author's Response: logan? behave himself? Pshaw! like that'll happen! ;)

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2009 8:50:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

We'll see how long that promise lasts. I like his comment about the students at the Student Union.
“I wasn’t flirting with those girls. It’s important that you know that. We happened to meet up again at the student union, and they invaded my booth with military precision.”
This made me laugh.

Author's Response: thanks for the review. glad you got a laugh out of this chapter and as for logan and his promise? yeah. the man's only human.

Reviewer: Wolverines_darlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 9:06:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow great chapter! Could not stop laughin when the chickens went cluck! Kiss scene woo! Awesome keep up the great work cant wait to read more =)

Author's Response: heh, i don't know what i was smoking when the chickens came out! glad you got a good laugh though.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 8:28:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

Gah! I can't tell you again how much I love this. Did I leave those love comments when I beta'd? I love Logan trying to get it across from her that he wasn't hitting on the girls. I thought it was adorable and sheepish and everything else! *grins* Then the kiss was wonderful.

Oh, and use Askita instead of Kristi would ya? *grins* I appreciate it and love betaing for you. You didn't need that much work. *grins*

Author's Response: yay! thanks for all your help. and no, i didn't get those comments before but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll have the next couple of chapters heading your way soon for betaing. =)

Reviewer: Isis Nocturne Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 5:25:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

More! More! MORE! DAMN that was hot! And then the shame... Yeah... I'm totally addicted, and I need a new chappie! PLEASE!

Author's Response: next chapter is at the betas. i'll post as soon as i get it back. :)

Reviewer: freelke Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2009 4:43:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

behave? thnat's no fun! I enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response: glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 2:30:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

poor Marie! she doesn't even need to show up to her own classes anymore, Logan runs the show now....oh well, can't say I mind all that much though ;)
and I have to say I have a tiny crush on your Bobby...he's just so helpless and cute...aw

Author's Response: heh, I totally think Bobby is crush-worthy. i just don't like him together with Marie. That's Logan's. ;)

Reviewer: Epic Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 6:34:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ok, first, I think we have all had that kind of morning where nothing went right. I know I have.

And I love the way he kept egging her on with his eyes. But the way she pointed him out to everyone was classic. Can't wait to find out what happened between L and his grandparents, though.

On to the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: heh, thanks for the review! you're right. we al have those mornings. i figured she would be no exception.

Reviewer: askita Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 7:06:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

This is awesome! I'm really loving Logan distracting everyone but I also cannot wait for Marie to put all those girls in their places. *grins* I want some quality one on one time with them though! When is that coming?

Oh, btw... the next Chapter of Last Call is at the beta. Are you happy? Your guilt trip worked!

Author's Response: am i happy? of course i'm happy!! =) but it's been so long since you updated that now i have to go back and reread the entire story from its beginning. oh the torture... lol. ;)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 6:25:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

He has to know he is doing, he has to. Just wait until she gets to the works he is supposed to see. I really like this story. I hope you get inspired.

Author's Response: inspiration is slowly trickling in. i'll have more to post soon, i hope.

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