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Reviewer: Strfallenangl23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 3:14:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

oooohhh I wanna read more! I gotta know what happens next!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Just posted chapter 2 and after dinner, I'll work on 3!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 7:19:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhhh I shouldn't of check my email and seen this. I read it at 7.30 am and went into work horny as hell. You should make them have a morning after where they don't know what to do or say

Author's Response: I apologize for any discomfort caused by reading smut prior to work ;D It's terrible when you have to go out in public and all you can think about is Logan (or Hugh Jackman) naked and in a bed....I should stop now....I need to cook dinner. No more smutty thoughts until after using something that can burn my house down.

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 1:49:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! That was awesome. And the smut was pretty good too.

I think they should have the whole morning-after deal, but she should be all, thanks for the great lay, and he should be all hurt but not showing it. And then he should go after her and she should be all, okay but we're just friends with benefits. And he should drag her kicking and screaming into love and a relationship.

What can I say, I love my angst, but it's always better with lots of smut-chasers ;-P

Just my two cents.
Melanie

Author's Response: I was thinking she should be the one real chill about it, and let him be more concerned with defining the relationship....I hope to have the next chapter up sometime today or this evening. Thanks for the suggestions!

Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2009 10:11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

ohhh, very intriguing... and HOT.
You should definately continue this story. :)

Author's Response: I definitely want to continue this....I'm just not sure where to go, yet. I'm gonna sleep on it and try a new chapter tomorrow

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