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Date: 05/15/2009 11:04:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sorry, I had no ideas at the time but have now given it more thought..
You could maybe justify the change of pace and OOC-ness with the fact that Rogue absorbed Logan again and so isn't exactly herself but more hyped up, randy, etc, and follow up with her reverting to normal over a few days..
she could maybe start feeling all bruised and battered after all their violent sex exertions when her body starts returning to normal and she could want to take a different approach as his personality wears off her.
It could also be fun to have her be duly embarassed when she later faces her fellow X-Men and realises that they all heard her/them, etc ;)
Also, if you want to carry on the plot side of the story they could have them seek out revenge on Mystique!
Author's Response: Good ideas!! Thanks so much for helping me out. I will work on another chapter over the weekend, and hopefully post it Monday. And I like the idea of getting revenge on Mystique. I really appreciate the suggestions. I really want to make sure the story is complete, and after going over it again, I agree it just kinda didn't make it to complete.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 4:13:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
I don't know.. the change of pace and tone felt wrong as you moved into the sex scene, it just felt rushed and OOC :(
Author's Response: Should I maybe do another chapter to tie it up? Any suggestions on how to fix it? I was having a case of writer's block, and I just wasn't sure what to do. Maybe I should go back in and re-work it.
Date: 05/14/2009 3:26:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
yes, let's all say thanks to jubilee indeed ^^
very nice ending, we even got "i love you", aw :)
Author's Response: I might do another chapter, I agree w/AugustDawn that it felt kinda rushed towards the end, but I'm glad you liked it anyway.
Date: 05/13/2009 2:09:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think this is a fine ending to the fic. Good story!
Author's Response: Thank You!