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[Report This]Date: 05/07/2009 1:02:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Captivating chapter, very moving, and great dialogue.
I would suggest not translating the French though, either use French or not but don't translate it, or maybe just put the translations right at the end so they don't detract from the flow.
Author's Response: The translation is more of just a personal preference, my French isn't all that great and sometimes when theres a lot of it in a story and its a lengthy piece and the translation isn't until the end I find I've just by passed the dialogue. There won't be a lot of french though so no worries.
Date: 04/30/2009 6:58:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh wow, I really enjoyed the begining where she's just watching her reflection. luv how Rogue and Remmy are in there own little world, it's like Logan isn't really there. and that fight was pretty cool. Hope you update soon, this is such an awesome fic.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2009 5:24:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmmmmm
This is very interesting. I like how your twisting the movie and the comic verse together and so far it really is working out extremely well =D Also, I've always like the strong and independent Rogue standing up for what she wants but I still can't ever get passed it when she is so full of anger at Logan sometimes =P Just me but I still love it!
Now I'm just gonna have to be patient and wait to see how the story pans out
Date: 04/30/2009 4:13:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Eh, it's not that I like Remy more than Logan (God forbid), but it's allways strange for me when someone makes him so completely bad. I'm more of a Jean hater. But hey, keep it coming.
Author's Response: Its funny that you use the words 'completely bad' because all I can say is that at this point in the story not everything is clear about the character's intensions or even whose lying and whose not. And besides I've always found Remy to be someone who loves to antagonize people and he can be selfish when it comes to a high price. But this was only a brief introduction of his character, because obviously Rogue had to save face to make sure he didn't mess up her own plans. Thanks for the input though :)