Reviews For The Ghost in Me
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Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2009 9:29:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, interesting!

Only thing that made me wonder was why if Logan thinks "Was it a twist of fate that somehow the very thing he’d wanted, had been thinking, had landed literally in his backyard." it hadn't been touched on during his introspective last chapter. I guess that would have ruined the surprise though. Now I'm dying to know where Rogue's been!

Good writing style by the way!

Author's Response: Thanks for the interest. In the first chapter Logan very subtly, extremely subtly references Rogue, I made sure to have a tiny piece of something to tie it in, such as his thoughts on how 'when someone or something doesn't want to be found' but you're right I definitely didn't want to ruin the surprise.

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 8:50:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Holy crap I'm intrigued as hell! More please!

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