Wow. I enjoyed this entire series, but this chapter...has got to be my favorite. By far. I love the way you seamlessly transition between hot, feral thoughts and hot, feral action.

"I grasp her shoulders and nearly crush her between my body and the wall to get a better leverage before plunging in deeper. She will have bruises. She will have my mark on her. She will be alive. She will be mine."

Love the staccato beat of those last lines, mimicking his thrusts.

"I’m going to skewer her uterus soon, but I have to get deeper. I want to disappear, dissolve to wet heat surrounding me and never leave again. I can see from her eyes she doesn’t understand what I’m asking"

I love that Logan is so fierce in his desperation. All these hard words, an such hurt vulnerability underneath.

And then his lines at the end, fucking her. That's all that's needed.

Perfection. How do you do that with so few words? How do you make it so immediate, make force sound unforced? Love your Logan muse.

Oh, dear. You know, you're VERY good at writing these sex scenes. It's not just the action but the dialogue is perfect as well. It's like god damn hot, dark poetry or something when its all together. Very good.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I'm no poet. Just have a tad too wild imagination for my own good. :)