Well, my heart rate is certainly up! That was hot...good job!

oh

my

god.

you? are awesome. and i worship you. in the second pew, right behind Logan and Marie. shhhh.

this is the best sexual chapter

love the fact she's the one that tearing him up. *smirk*

Wow. I enjoyed this entire series, but this chapter...has got to be my favorite. By far. I love the way you seamlessly transition between hot, feral thoughts and hot, feral action.

"I grasp her shoulders and nearly crush her between my body and the wall to get a better leverage before plunging in deeper. She will have bruises. She will have my mark on her. She will be alive. She will be mine."

Love the staccato beat of those last lines, mimicking his thrusts.

"I’m going to skewer her uterus soon, but I have to get deeper. I want to disappear, dissolve to wet heat surrounding me and never leave again. I can see from her eyes she doesn’t understand what I’m asking"

I love that Logan is so fierce in his desperation. All these hard words, an such hurt vulnerability underneath.

And then his lines at the end, fucking her. That's all that's needed.

Perfection. How do you do that with so few words? How do you make it so immediate, make force sound unforced? Love your Logan muse.

OK, just hold it right there, missy!! You CANNOT end the series there!! Angst and PWP simply DO NOT go together! PWP is suppose to be fun, foofy, a pleasant and relaxed respite from all the angst & darkness that ends up here. You gotta make 'em happy again!
Even Scooter should understand Logan's pain after the fight with Mystique, even *he's* not that mean & cruel.
C'mon, aran, I know you've got a happy/sexy ending in there someplace...let it out for pity's sake!

Author's Response: There will be happy ending. Very happy ending. As soon as Logie's in the mood again. Shouldn't take long. ;)

Oh, dear. You know, you're VERY good at writing these sex scenes. It's not just the action but the dialogue is perfect as well. It's like god damn hot, dark poetry or something when its all together. Very good.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I'm no poet. Just have a tad too wild imagination for my own good. :)

wow, that is so hot!!!. I'd love to hear what they get into next.lol

~and Marie… She was kind of trapped under me.~

All and all, not such a bad place to be, now is it?

But PLEASE!! let's get on to chapter 5 and get the poor girl out from under that adamantium enhanced body!!



Author's Response: Uh... The fact that this is PWP doesn't of course have anything to do with your eagerness to read yet another chapter, right? Don't expect part 5 to take off where they left. This is kind of therapy for me. A way to get back in the mood to write something else. Only thing tying these chappies together is that mirror.