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Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2011 4:10:36 PM Title: The Last Fairytale

I rather prefer this version of the story - ending, as it does, with him telling one more story to an aged Megan - to the longer version in which he returns a year later.... This is sad and sweet, and is a perfect ending for the collection of your stories I put together. As always, I am happy every time I reread your work.

Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2010 11:16:35 PM Title: The Last Fairytale

Not the one I thought I was going to be reading. Or maybe you cut out the last scene? I seem to remember you writing a story where Logan comes to Megan as he's dying, and slumps over on her porch, dead finally after all these years alone w/o Marie. Am I right?

Still, this is an inspired little piece. so sad, tho, that you have written him as cutting himself off from all his descendants when they could be making him happy in his old age, stubborn old patriarch that he could've been. As if he were the only long-lived mutant in the world! Surely there'd be other ferals w/the same problem... but I'm ranting :)

Author's Response: My apologies. I finally found out my stories have been listed on the new WRFA and that there have been responses to them. rnYes, there is indeed an alternate ending to this story. http://www.thetinhut.com/library/lasttale.html (warning, the coding might be a little corrupted with age)rnAs for cutting himself off, I think he did that for their sanity, not his. Still, valid point that he shouldn't have done that.

Reviewer: mltaylor1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 3:14:36 PM Title: The Last Fairytale

wow...

I love this story. So powerful and beautiful.

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