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[Report This]Date: 01/14/2007 10:46:39 PM Title: Solace
oooooh... more!
Date: 01/13/2007 3:16:19 PM Title: Surfacing
Well, a shift from personal drama to external drama. Looks like you're incorporating bits of the comics, too. I'm interested to see where you take this.
Author's Response: I didn't mean for it to switch like that, and I was a little afraid that I'd completely messed up my story, but I think I can make it work. Usually, I don't like when viewpoints change so much, but there's so much information I have to fill in that writing it only from Marie's perspective is impossible. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/13/2007 3:15:28 PM Title: Elsewhere
Really enjoyed this chapter. Rogue & Logan were fighting each other and themselves. Logan was especially well-written, I thought. Even though he was all over the place -- treating her like a kid, lecturing her, challenging her, asking if he'd hurt her, deciding for her -- it was clear the whole time what his motivations were. Even without chapter 1 to help us.
Poor Logan. It was the wrong choice for him, too.
Date: 01/13/2007 3:11:58 PM Title: Fear
I really liked this chapter, the stream-of-consciousness of it. How Rogue seemed older and yet younger at the same time. Did he enjoy it? Was it the right thing? How is she supposed to be from now on? She's *not* old enough, she wasn't responsible enough, and she has made a mistake. Well-written, very honest. And intriguing.
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2007 7:31:58 PM Title: Surfacing
AAAAAAHHHH!!!! lol seeee! i must be psychic. or you're transmitting your thought into my head... that could be it. good chapter! but why does everyone have to leave it hanging? i neeeeeeeeeeeed more! PLEASE! #whimpers plaintively# please?
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 4:39:49 AM Title: Building a Mystery
wow! really quick that time! cool! your story is quite a gripping piece of literature.
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2007 3:08:41 AM Title: Plenty
oooohhh!!!! i know where it's going... she gets her powers back, but gradually, so she learns to control them, and they get stronger... maybe she still absorbs them, but she keeps their memories and powers, and can use them to fight against them. logan will save her in some way. and she'll end up saving his life too...
or it could be nothing like that at all. but anyway.......... thx 4 updating quickly, and i hope there'll be another chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: 01/08/2007 8:17:36 PM Title: Ice
I love you! and i hate you!
thanks 4 the news chapters, but how could you leave me hanging...
:( :( :( more soon?
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2007 5:18:17 AM Title: Elsewhere
i love your story! but you better have the next chapter SOON!!!!! or else... i'll dissolve into a little heap and start crying on you. you know just how to make me upset don't you... lol
please say there'll be more soon?