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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 3:15:28 PM Title: Elsewhere

Really enjoyed this chapter. Rogue & Logan were fighting each other and themselves. Logan was especially well-written, I thought. Even though he was all over the place -- treating her like a kid, lecturing her, challenging her, asking if he'd hurt her, deciding for her -- it was clear the whole time what his motivations were. Even without chapter 1 to help us.

Poor Logan. It was the wrong choice for him, too.

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 5:18:17 AM Title: Elsewhere

i love your story! but you better have the next chapter SOON!!!!! or else... i'll dissolve into a little heap and start crying on you. you know just how to make me upset don't you... lol

please say there'll be more soon?

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