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Reviewer: silverthorne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2010 2:34:55 PM Title: Steaming

Damn me for getting involved in yet another **bleeping** WIP that hasn't been updated in a couple of years and probably never will be finished!

Be ye warned, readers!!

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2009 11:08:47 PM Title: Steaming

add more asap??!!

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2009 4:50:55 AM Title: Steaming

What you say about Sarah McLachlan songs all having Rogan potential is true. And Elsewhere really does describe their journey here...as they fumble towards ecstasy. This is painful to read because Marie's emotions are so real and messy and Logan's are no better. Your notion of prophecy and the way it was woven into some of the chapters was intriguing and I was a little disappointed to see that aspect basically disappear. Still, it seems like you have a lot more to say here and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the characters and their relationships, including the secondaries. I'm glad you didn't gloss over them or ignore them, but chose to make them surprisingly three-dimensional.

Please help them find their I love you.
Melanie

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 9:52:50 AM Title: Steaming

Wow, I will definately be looking forward to any updates you have on this one~ I love how you're really dealing with Rogue's issues around her powers and even Logan. She sounds so confused and pissed off and ready to burst, it works wonderfully.
And how Logan feels towards her is really neat too. Not quite love or hate, but a million different strong emotions in between. And how he is disgusted with himself for it, but can't help wanting her. It's really awesome. I think that's probably how he would feel. It makes me think back to the scene in X2 with Logan and Mystique in the tent. And at one point she uses Rogue's form... and Logan looks sorta intrigued and grossed out all at the same time. And I think that's really it. I like it.

Your story is also really unique in how you're using the character voices and really giving a running dialogue of what they're going through. I think it really works well, and I wish you luck in continuing it.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2007 2:07:23 PM Title: Steaming

I hope that there will be more I just love this. It's so logan all confused and just wants what's his. Please update soon I just love this.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2007 10:26:05 AM Title: Steaming

Damn those two give me a headache!

Will there be more?

Reviewer: bluekatt Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 11:55:56 PM Title: Steaming

Oh wow!! This story has got me hooked. Wonderfully well written. Please tell me you're not finished and you've got more coming because I am absolutely loving it. Great job!!!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2007 3:48:15 PM Title: Steaming

Just read this and I love it. Please tell me you are going to continue with it! I NEED to read more!!!

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