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Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2011 1:29:38 AM Title: The Long and Winding Road

Oh no! Its over? You always end it in just the right place as to drive me nuts with the possibilities. Like the Dark Side of the Moon, This series was very well done. Kudos.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2010 5:00:56 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road

Oh that's beautiful. I do wish I knew what the job was that she was rushing off to do. Please, please post chapter 8 again so that I can know. This was truly enjoyable; spending the day in this universe. Thank you. It's hard to believe at times, the immense talent a teenager can have. Especially when it exceeds my own in this area. Thank you, again, for sharing it with us.

~Mia

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 11:10:26 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road

Huh. Well, that was different. Not bad, but different. Interesting characterisation of Rogue; it rang true for me in some ways (what with the whole immature teenager thing), but a little jarring in others (the way you described her mutation was very different than most authors do). The writing was quite good and does your 17-year-old self credit. I'm impressed with how well you turned a phrase, even then!

My favourite part of the whole thing was how introspective it was, and the development of Rogue's character throughout the series.

Thanks for sharing.
Melanie

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I totally agree about there being some definite oddities (and some things that, frankly, don't make all that much sense upon reflection). But it's nice to hear that the narrative and characterization makes up for it. Reading this makes me wonder what I'm getting "wrong" (if you know what I mean) about my second Rogan fic. It'll be interesting to see what I think of the earlier parts when it's finished. :)

Reviewer: MoonlightStorm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 4:42:34 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road

Awwww. That ending is just... awwww. Logan! Dancing! Happiness! What's not to love? I always get really drawn into your fics. This was just fantastic on every level known to man.

Author's Response: :D I'm so glad the ending's satisfying for you. I can never tell about endings, which is probably why this fic languished in limbo for such an obscene amount of time.

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 4:27:00 PM Title: The Long and Winding Road

wow i noticed just now that you used song titles for all your chapters..the beatles in this one, ac/dc in the last one and...i don't remember who else in the first story. that's very clever actually, i like it.
anyway...it's over now *sniff*; and it's a great ending to a great story =)
i loved how you brought some stuff about america and freedom and all that in there...and the play-doh ;)
and logan in a suit! dancing! ohhh yes!

Author's Response: What a marathon read! Thanks for all your comments! Haha, I'm a real nerd about using song titles for fics. My other series, Dark Side of the Moon, is all based on the Pink Floyd album.

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