Please tell me you intend to come back to this. You've started a great story that has great potential. Please don't stop here. Would love to see so much more!!!

I thought you did a fantastic job explaining what happened. And given the fact that we are talking about a comic book i thought your storyline was exceptionally unique and believable.

Excellent explanation of what Charles wrought. You actually had be on the edge of my proverbial seat waiting to see exactly what he had done and how Emma was going to resolve the situation. Again, well done. I also greatly enjoyed the image of Rogue embodying everyone she had touched and shouting at every self-righteous soul beneath her feet. Very kickass. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our dynamic duo in the next chapter.

That was amazing!!! The way you described everything even though we have yet to figure out why Rogue was sucking everyone up I am loving this story. I can't believe that Charles would do that even if Rogue was going crazy... Why would he want to kill her? *sigh*

I'm looking forward to how she assimilates into her mind ^__^

Really good. I wasn't planning on reading all of it right away, maybe just the first couple of paragraphs while I was working on dinner, but it's good. Really good. I-think-I-burned-the-chicken-good. I can't wait to see what happens when she wakes up.