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Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2011 10:28:12 PM Title: Hope

A great job. I'm glad Logan's there to help Marie. Now that she's told Logan, he and the others will be able to help her.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2009 11:23:23 PM Title: Hope

It wasn't lame, and the ideas weren't weird; it's the stream of consciousness writing that got you thru what you needed to get thru, and on top of helping YOU it turned into a great story!! No apologies necessary, I really liked it!

Reviewer: Tasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2009 2:30:34 PM Title: Hope

I liked it. The WRFA crashed after I finished the first chapter so I was upset all night that I wouldn't get to know what the heck was going on.
The story definitely has potentials, but like you said - you wrote it to get something out. Maybe someday you can go back and re-write... work on things a bit more. I'd love to see how it turns out. =D

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2009 11:04:49 AM Title: Hope

yes, when you finished that last chapter I couldn't belive that it was happening. Thought that the whole story was wonderfully written. Is this the last chapter or is there more.

Author's Response: it was kind of mean to end it there and not immeditately reveal that it's a dream...lol sorry.
but thanks very much for reading+commenting =)
and yes this was the last chapter

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