aw. Sha bebe! (as the Cajuns say) Very sweet ending.

I kinda didn't like the part where (once again) you tried to just copy-n-paste the X1 movie dialogue. There were some places where, yes, the symmetry/irony of certain lines felt great, but not ALL the lines fit the new situation you had written. Watch out for those things! I suggest, next time you're tempted to write such a scene, that you go back an hour or two after all the editing is done and read JUST that small section of dialogue ... to help you get the sense of how well that scene stands alone, and to help you see it with "fresh eyes", so to speak, as much as possible.

And, I found it quite remarkable how quickly Logan got his energy back -- one minute he's struggling to walk across the medlab, the next he's traversing the entire length of Xavier's vast lawn & gardens without even leaning on Marie for support, and energetically pacing back & forth! Hee Hee. I think you get what I'm saying. It may sound like I'm nit-picking, but I'm doing it for your benefit. Overlooking small but important details disrupts the logical continuity of the events in each scene, and weakens your whole story. I know you can do better b/c you definitely have talent! All you lack is the care to spend enough editing time to catch these things! Don't be in too much of a hurry to post ... we're willing to wait for high quality!

Still, this is a smartly-written tale overall. Your big strength, as I've said before, is to get across your characters' feelings. Just take care to balance the sappiness with some good plot points as you have more or less managed successfully thus far.

I realize it's been a long time since you've touched this story. Please don't abandon it now!

Aaaawwwww. And don't kill Jean. If you kill her, she will not be able to suffer. A lot.

Author's Response: LOL, so far Jean isn't going to die...but the littlest thing about her might set me off and I will take care of her...we will see!