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Reviewer: Capt_Mackenzie Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2010 11:47:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

I really like this scenario of their first meeting! It creates a really new kind of protective dynamic, without the somewhat overly-dramatic he-saved-my-life-36-hours-after-meeting-me situation that the movie gave us. (yes, I did love Bryan Singer's script, but ya gotta admit ... it was over-the-top in some aspects! It felt like cheating, b/c they didn't get to know each other in the way ppl normally do. This way, they can become friends the slow and steady way like everyone else has to do, yet you give them a valid reason to still have a 'connection')

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 5:17:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ooooh. So sweet the way they are coming together. Can't wait fir the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I love these two characters, as does everyone else on here. The sweetness is fun to write, and there will be more to come.

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