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Reviewer: manda-dee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 9:26:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

My Place In This World

The word This should be capitalized...

Other than that, and other than the fact that the characters are all completely OOC this stories okay

Author's Response: ok, this=This, there ya go! As for the characters being OOC, well I'm just writing them exactly how they should be in this story. That's why we call it an AU right? See, the good thing about writing fanfiction is...you can write whatever and however ya want. Thanks for taking the time to comment! :)

Reviewer: New Moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 9:44:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I already hate Jean on principle but you are taking me to a whole new level!

Author's Response: And the sad thing about that is....it makes me feel wonderful to know I'm adding to your Jean hate. Isn't that sad! LOL! Thanks for the comment and letting me know I'm not alone on the Jean department.

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