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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2010 8:43:06 AM Title: Sick of Dreaming in Black and You

Love this eloquent, well spoken Logan. Nicely done!! And you CERTAINLY have the talent, don't let anyone tell you different!!

Reviewer: nikkibelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2009 6:23:16 AM Title: Sick of Dreaming in Black and You

"We have sliced our hearts in half and traded pieces" ...so beautiful!!
somehow you managed to find words and metaphors for feelings that can't usually be described so accurately. this was so intense and emotional, i loved it. great job.
oh and i agree about writing shorter stories, it really is easier, plots confuse me ;)
but you definitely don't lack the talent from what i've just read =P

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